|Reviews for Exchange|
| HarmonyintheDark chapter 1 . 12/29/2016
I saw a short film in youtube with similar lines, dialouges and such. Nonetheless, it is still adorable to see it here as an AceZo fanfic :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2014
That was adorable! I really liked how it was only revealed at the end that Zoro had no idea what Ace was saying! I thought he was just taken aback by Ace's forwardness XD
And Sanji is the ultimate wingman! :3
| MetyRyuma chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
XD I'm French, i understand english and I'm learning Spanish... and it's acexzoro.
It must be my lucky day xp
Super fic, great job, mon cher ;P
| merichuel chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
I liked this, it's so cute! _
BTW i'm Spaniard, from a town near Barcelona XD
about your Spanish
"¿Cómo se llama?" is freaking formal. I would only ask this to a very very important person in Spain or to a elderly (70years) person. The rest of the world should be "¿Cómo te llamas?"
(Be careful when people correct you with the spanish, south-america english works differently)
"Gusto en conocerte. ¿Puedo sentarme aquí?" Sounds really weird. It's grammatically correct, but doesn't sound like what a young lad would say in the street. "Encantado de conocerte.¿Puedo sentarme aquí?" sounds much better
' Te enamoré a primera vista..' is completely wrong. Was it on purpose because Zoro doesn't speak spanish well?
what you are saying is "I made you fall in love with me at first sight" but i'm guessing you were trying to say "I fell in love with you at first sight" that would be "Me he enamorado de ti a primera vista"
after this, i repeat, so cute! And Sanji is really mean xD Poor Zoro if he really answers "me too" after having Ace hitting on him the whole conversation xD
PD: if you are gonna write more and need a hand with spanish, feel free to ask xD
| brukleflesche chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
I quite enjoy AceZoro, so I'm very happy you wrote and shared this fic. :) About the Spanish... Well, while "¿Cómo te llamas?" is correct, it's too familiar. "¿Cómo se llama?" would be more appropriate. Also, it should be "Te enamoré a primera vista," otherwise he's saying he fell in love with himself. ;
But anyway, great job, and I wouldn't be at all opposed to a sequel (hint, hint).
| Azh Hikari chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
Aw, I think you have the knack to get me smiling reading your story
This is so cute and gives you a warm feeling and an odd tendencies to smile continuously XDD
I would very love to read a sequel to this.
Thank you so much. You made my day
| FlyingMonkiesAttack chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
Your french is actually "I have found" so otherwise you're correct. It just bugged me though. :/
| The Wandering Swordsman chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
Awwwwwwww~~~This was so cute and sweet~
I really liked this one-shot!
ESPECIALLY, especially because it has AcexZoro