Reviews for In The Stars
DreamOfTheEndless chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
Ahh! Another slice of brilliance:) thank you so much for the lovely OS.

k1942 chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
A sweet, albeit sad, little story, because we know what this all leads to, don't we?
84gemstone chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
I did spot Bella's birthday. With one little kiss the world is changed
Two Lives chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
What a remarkable bit of whimsey. Quite original and fascinating. Thank you!
Iklepixie chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
Edward was there watching and knowing this could be the first step to a new life
withany chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
That was a lovely little glimpse into Edward's early life. Normally I get worked up if there's anyone else - any other girl, but you wrote Millicent as a very likeable girl. It's a shame she was poorly.
DesperateRomantic chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
this is cute.
amwine chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
Very interesting way to think of things. I caught the date that was mentioned. I didn't catch on to the sneezing until the end. Great job...thanks!
edwards-girl-4-ever chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
A lovely one shot.
oh werd chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
Beautiful. Gah. Just, beautifully done.
amikins chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
overall cute
CdrIvanova chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Oh what a lovely one-shot. I liked this one. Thanks!
LeeseeQ chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
What a fun idea for how Edward hot the flu, and it's fun to imagine that on some level he had a vague premonition of something more. The description of the world having kept marching straight while he turned a corner was excellent!
Lona W. Hall chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
Cool story - I figured out the sneeze thing I think at the second sneeze - missed the birthday though. These type of one shots are fun. Thanks for sharing!
Dragonflies2010 chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
ooh now there's an interesting theory of how he got the flu loved it you rock
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