Reviews for In The Stars
shc92 chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
This is a wonderful canon piece. I love Edward's thoughts on the future, and his date experience. LOL'd when he scared her - so fun to see him so young and playful. I appreciated that Millicent wasn't a "settling - any good man should be snapped up" type girl, though there was still the unfortunately practical side if that. Bittersweet. Wonder if she got her "real" kiss before illness took over. Found myself feeling grateful at Edward's second chance at living. Thanks for sharing!
Luvtwismut chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
I guess he has Millicent to thank for ending up with Bella! LOL

Thanks for these sweet story!
CassandraLowery chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
Loved this story! Very sweet, yet sad in a way, too.

Beautifully done!

-Cassandra :)
Elizabeth440 chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
What a great one-shot! If only Edward had known that his anticipation that he was on the cusp of something - while correct - would take so many years to be realized.

I love how you always flesh out Edward's human life in your stories. They're the connective tissue between Edward Masen and Edward Cullen.
The Terrible Jester chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
very good story
Nauticalmass chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
What a lovely glimpse into Edward Masen's life.
dawntwilight000 chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
I can't wait to see where you take us with this story. I have been very busy and haven't had a chance to read FF, but then I see 2 stories from my favorite author in my "save&read" box. I was so excited. Excellent job. I can't wait for more!
ChieriAn9eL chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
human Edward is very cute!
MSPT chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
*Sigh* I'll read anything you write. Your writing is so lovely and this tale was very nicely written. Thanks for sharing -
heygirl18 chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
I guess some things were just meant to be ;)

Thanks for writing and sharing such a lovely tale xx
bikechick3 chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
Poor Millicent, she never knew what she passed up.

I'm not a huge fan of one-shots, but I'll read anything you write! Another sweet one, thanks!
CindyWindy chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
Very sweet walk back in time! And you're very clever with the date and how Edward could've been exposed to the flu.
Darcyfitz1 chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
I love your writing SOOOOO much! You are simply one of my favorite Authors and I go mad when I get an update of your stories. Thank you for this amazing one shot! xoxo Jo Anna
joayla chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
Such a fantastic story. Have you considered writing a historical romance?

You truly are a gifted writer xxx
dlhk chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
Milli started it all! Haha. This was super cute. I'm glad he never found his "one" in his lifetime. So funny that he had such plans/ hopes for the future. An he "lived" to see it all. -mommyofboth
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