|Reviews for In The Stars|
| bikechick3 chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
Poor Millicent, she never knew what she passed up.
I'm not a huge fan of one-shots, but I'll read anything you write! Another sweet one, thanks!
| CindyWindy chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
Very sweet walk back in time! And you're very clever with the date and how Edward could've been exposed to the flu.
| Darcyfitz1 chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
I love your writing SOOOOO much! You are simply one of my favorite Authors and I go mad when I get an update of your stories. Thank you for this amazing one shot! xoxo Jo Anna
| joayla chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
Such a fantastic story. Have you considered writing a historical romance?
You truly are a gifted writer xxx
| dlhk chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
Milli started it all! Haha. This was super cute. I'm glad he never found his "one" in his lifetime. So funny that he had such plans/ hopes for the future. An he "lived" to see it all. -mommyofboth
| AbruptlyChagrined chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
| LouLouCullen chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
Yeah I finally got the Spanish flu at like the very end of the story...duh...I did get the September 13 thing though. Nicely written, I enjoyed it.
| flora926 chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
I loved this one shot, I found it sweet, humorous and touching. It was fun to see that in his human life Edward was nearly as big a klutz as Bella! Thanks for sharing the ideas that pop into your head!
| dazzled eyes22 chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
That was cute. I enjoyed the humor and romance in this period piece. I had to laugh when Edward scared her off the wall and how propriety would not allow him to dusk her off after he helped her up. It was great to see that Edward wanted more than just to stay in that small town. He wanted the world and he was meant to experience more than Milicent ever wanted to see. That conversation really showed that they were not meant to be, even before the kiss did. I am glad that she was honest with him when he asked whether he offended her. Thanks for this possible peak into Edward's past.
| Bells. Just Bells chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
hehe, or should we say thank goodness he kissed her! :)
That was so sweet. I really loved seeing human Edward. And I laughed over the falling and being hit in the head by a swing. This was a super cute moment that tied in so nicely with his ever after :)
Thank you for sharing this one shot with us! :)
| Edward's Eternal chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
Oh I love it when ideas pop into your head.
The graveyard scene made me laugh.
Well done !
| J.DRAST chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
Hello. Ooh! At the end I just realized the significance of the details in this first chapter. Very good. Atleast Millicent decently let him down and didn't string him along. Thanks, Suzan Noerr
| Manga pixie chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
awe very sweet story. Thanks for sharing
| packermom chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
I just love it when little ideas pop in your head!
| Songirl chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
Wow. Delightful, interesting little piece.