Reviews for A Fake Family
Anonlisious chapter 3 . 9/11/2015
I think this is really good, only you got a few things wrong. Blood tests dont tell you how far along someone is in pregnancy. Thats what the scans are for. And I dont really like how bitchy Bella is to Edward. Yes, this is an odd situation, but her being so snappy is really off-putting and doesnt really make the reader like her. A lot of the things you have going on here doesnt really make that much sense either. If you are still working on this, maybe you should consider fixing some of these things. Im not going to read the rest because, no offense, but Im not a fan of Rude!Bella. All that aside, you have a pretty good plot going on. :D
Fandayne chapter 7 . 8/18/2015
I have read your story a couple of months ago and just finished re-reading it a while ago. You know what? your story really got through my veins. I just wanted to tell you that i really like it and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue writing more and nore chapters. Thank you very much!
It'sHardIKnow chapter 6 . 12/24/2014
... I'm speechless! You should become an author! You're actually good at writing your own stories. Can't wait for the next chapters! Eeeeeek!
It'sHardIKnow chapter 7 . 12/24/2014
Yeah, I can be your beta! I'm great at grammar and to be honest, you aren't all that bad at it! Are you English or American?
Harmony chapter 7 . 6/2/2014
This story was cute. Please, keep going.
Guest chapter 7 . 2/23/2014
cmon chapter 8
Chloe chapter 7 . 11/13/2013
I really enjoyed reading this :)
samheart chapter 7 . 9/10/2013
I was wondering if it was going to get finish
BELAVERA chapter 7 . 3/7/2013
I noticed it has been several months since updated. The story isn't finished is? I hope there is more, I just found this story and I like it.
stacylenn chapter 7 . 1/2/2013 updates in a while ):
blueyez2010 chapter 7 . 12/26/2012
Looking forward to the next update
Thatx1xchick chapter 7 . 12/23/2012
i really like your story and i hope you continue soon :D
Guest chapter 7 . 11/12/2012
They both like each other so there's hope.
Twilighter chapter 7 . 11/11/2012
Great story, keep the chapters coming..
Guest chapter 7 . 11/10/2012
plz write more soon love it xxxxx
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