KNEW ITTTTT i KNEW pyro was going to die the minute pyro got introduced immediately immediately oh yeah i can already see the skull n crossbones over this guys head he’s not gonna last that is a dead man right there. s like clockwork the pyro’s always gotta die. anyone dies gotta be pyro. legit don’t think i’ve ever read a long, full team centered story that killed off a main character that didn’t kill off pyro at some point. MAN. anyways nice story was very interesting concept

I know this is an old story but I just couldn't put it down when I wasn't at work! I thought it ended perfectly, in a sad, but satisfying way. Showing that everything changes and nothing is permanent, even if it is sad to think about

I actually agree with you killing off Fischer and the BLU Spy coming around to ensure he isn't tracked. At that point Dell is so tired that there's no point to revenge, not without him or the rest of the team getting killed

Thank you so much for writing this!

I want you to know that I read part of this story back when it was a WIP, then suddenly remembered it last night and spent several hours searching keywords and looking through the tf2 sections here and on AO3 in hopes of finding it to read again. Only back to chapter 6 thus far, but I want you to know that this story is excellent and stuck so deeply in my mind. I hope you're well, whatever you're up to now.

Good story.

Haha, I love the idea of Scout being a biker and a Medi-Pen! Great job!

I love elaborate side story

Fairly old story, seems like fun

I spent hours reading this
Not regretting a single moment
This was purely amazing and awesome

Hey-ho
I am sorry that I just joined onto this story (a bit late in the game, it may seem) and I loved it. I especially admire your representation of the characters, I felt as if it were spot on. I greatly enjoyed reading this, picked up on a few things that I will implement into my writings (with more gore, I'm a gore person. In my opinion you need more of it. That is my only beef with this story). I especially liked your use of a single character as a "trouble maker". I think that you completely made up Fischer, but I adore how you had his description of his regretting to go back into his suit, and the speed at which those regrets disappeared entirely. He had become the suit again.
And should you read this, I have an odd question. Has anyone made a fanart picture of Fischer's coffin with the Mercs gathered around it? i just feel that that is the most powerful scene in the story. Well written.
Anyway, thank you for creating, posting, and keeping up with this monster of a project.

Fizzy Pop

This is the best tf2 fan fic i ever read

Thanks for writing, I like post-as-you-write stories, because sometimes things happen that were not entirely planned, and it's a bit like a tiny baby twist for everyone.
It was also massive, and once again I find myself wondering why on earth I'm reading this past midnight when I haven't doe any work, but it's because it was really interesting and I wanted to find out what happens next.

I loved the Scout bit at the end. I really wanted him to have a happy ending too.

I'm glad he didn't die of that really bad cough he seemed to have.
Fisher was a good bloke.
Endings are sad, because it's the end.

This is fun. I love Heavy when he's happy about things.

FISCHER CANNOT BE DEAD! NO! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! TO THE SPY!

This ending tastes good in my mouth.