Reviews for Of Breathing and Breaking, Falling and Flying
kitachiuchiha9573 chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
BRAVO. That was a beautiful piece of prose. I really love how you can just -feel- the emotions that they are going through. For Tenten, you are spot-on and defintely on character, but for Neji... the beginning parts were perfect. It was just the later parts that were abit off~ I suppose it was the swearing. Otherwise, beautiful potryal of emotions! That is what love is about mostly, -emotions-. I LOVED IT! Thank you for writing such a brilliant piece of art~ _
kenzinator chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
This was so beautiful! It's been a while since I've read a fanfic like this. :)
Midnight Insomniac chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
That was damn pretty. I liked the odd punctuation and I just felt it was like poetry. I liked the flow an you really captured the feeling of love well.

AwEsOmE jOb XD

Keep writing!