|Reviews for Mondays|
| ShiftersFate chapter 1 . 2/15
I loved it!
| nancy103 chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
Loved the Bulma and Goku interaction! Nice one shot!
| Curlyquills chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
I really liked the dynamic between Goku and Bulma in this story. As well as Vegeta's reaction to being smacked on the ass.. I just about died when I read that. Keep up the good work!
| Kitty in the Box chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
THIS IS SO SWEEEEEEEEEEEEET! KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
| Trunksmybaby chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
| Shinsun chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
VegetaBul is a bit of a guilty pleasure for me. I dont usually appreciate canon shippings because they're usually badly-handled and not original, but you did a great job with this one. ;)
| Miss AbbyM chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
I have no idea why this has only received 13 reviews. Very well written, witty, romantic but well within each character's makeup. Great work from a great author.
| Bulma Woman Briefs chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
I really enjoyed reading this fanfic. I think you did an excellent job. That is a great way to show the way Monday goes from worst to best day.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
wow you're first it seemed like you've been doing them for a while it was very good.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Aw I loved it!
| TickleMeTurquoise chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
I think your stories are like crack to me. I just can't stop reading them. They're all so amazing, and this one is no exception! You did a great job!
| catgirl26 chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
Characterization was very good - you can really see Bulma's cocky self-assurance, and Vegeta's surly sort of distancing tactics in the way they interact with each other.
I quite liked the scene in the gravity room, when Bulma accidentally turns on the machine and it's up to Vegeta to save her. Not that I like to see her hurt, but it was nice to see real consequences occur - one thing I did think was that 50 times Earth's gravity might have just squashed Bulma dead though. ;) That particular use of the gravity room was interesting though - I don't know that I've seen Vegeta saving Bulma from too many Gs before, so that was a really nice, refreshing bit of creativity. I also liked Goku's bit in pushing Bulma and Vegeta together, his not-so-subtle way that he told Bulma that Vegeta might like her.
There were a few issues of word use and punctuation, but mostly minor and likely just typos. Your vs you're, fowl vs foul, women vs woman, and some misused semicolons were what I noticed most.
Overall a really cute story, with an enjoyable plotline and good characterization. :) Thanks for sharing.
| NNP chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
This was so sweet!
| FireStorm1991 chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Aw, that was kind of cute :3
| Cara2012 chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
lol very cute