|Reviews for The Luminous Future|
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/15/2017
Are you by any chance still writing for this? I would love to see it continue.
I think its quite good. But could use some more indication of who is who. I keep mixing up Kevin and Kyle.
Other than this it's quite decent.
| Cheshide chapter 4 . 7/17/2013
This is amazing!
I wanna see more of Kevin!
| Crash chapter 2 . 12/27/2012
A really nice attempt at a crossover. You don't get carried away and rush plots easily like some people here do. An interesting story, granted it is your first. Update soon. Your fans are waiting.
| RiddleMeThis17 chapter 4 . 9/10/2012
YES. FINALLY. AN UPDATE. I LOVE YOU. LIKE A FRIEND. A REALLY REALLY REALLY AWESOME FRIEND.
I just forgot if that meant I was the reallyx3 awesome friend or if you were- Oh well, we're both really, really, really awesome!
And uh... Why is the dialogue bold?
Anyway, shortness aside-
EPICNESS! . Can't wait for the next update!
| RiddleMeThis17 chapter 3 . 7/23/2012
... Wow. Amazing. Brilliant.
| SkyBarrier2020 chapter 3 . 12/25/2011
This is kinda hard to read..you should use dialouge in your story, seperate the quotations the characters are saying from the paragraphs.. This is a great story none the less!
| MammonDaughter chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
I'm laughing too hard to write anything meaningful, get back to you later!