|Reviews for Flying through Mud|
| logicat chapter 25 . 6/30
I guess it's the time period but Astrid is a hypocritical over acting annoyance instead of a bad ass pragmatic girl. Love the storyline and the writing:)
| Ulcaasi chapter 50 . 6/14
WHY DO I FEEL LIKEYOU JUST DRAGGED ME THROUGH 50 CHAPTERS OF PAIN FLUFF SORROW AND MUD FOR JUST THAT FINAL LINE. Bet you been waiting all 50 chapters just to finally say that :P
Whew. Hit the end. Aw yis. Astrid's mother would probably go ballistic. Hiccup's father has probably given up already. Thanks for the excellent story. I think my favourite portion is before the two year gap. Because everything after that became extremely emotionally taxing. And half the time I felt like punching them both.
"He is here to (-make-) a leg for Hiccup," Lord Haddock said
closer to Hiccup… and her (-brother-) was most likely
means to you, and if he means more than… say… (-your-) own selfish happiness."
"Not (-when-) the object in question is rightfully mine."
until two days later (-that-) something changed in the
| Ulcaasi chapter 40 . 6/11
Hmmm why doesn't Toothless just melt the blasted chain? ._.
Mr. Whyte was regaining his (-composure-), straightening and rubbing his cheek
| Ulcaasi chapter 38 . 6/11
Damnit. I knew this was coming somehow or other. Hiccup's just not Hiccup with his left leg. Still caught me offguard though.
| Ulcaasi chapter 36 . 6/11
*whistles* weeeeeeeeellll. Things are certainly going to get pretty tense around here unless Hiccup was listening in. Which I doubt and now thinks he's been played again all because Astrid couldn't just tell the blasted truth. Why can't people just tell the truth. Sure it hurts but lying hurts more. Like leaving an open wound to fester instead of enduring the sharp pain of some alcohol and a bandage. *sigh*
"Not you. (-Your-) father," she said, shuddering slightly. "I don't think
"(-Your-) fiancé needs help figuring something out. Perhaps you can (-aid-) her."
| Ulcaasi chapter 33 . 6/11
Oh damn. OH DAMN. THESE TWO. BLOODY HELL. They both need a good slap and talking to. The amount of knots they tie my heart into. Ughhhhhh. I think it worked better with Hiccup exploding. There's waaaay too much emotion invested for him not to. And if he didn't and they got together it would have probably become worse in the long run. Much worse.
She (-wracked-) her brain, trying to think of a way to
This woman seemed to be (-no older/not much older-) than Hiccup himself. What if she
Lady Camicazi, you will be the (-primary-) instructor, as you
this to make sure you don't go (-too-) hard on her.
Lady Camicazi wiped a (-tear-) from her eye
I ask that I may take (-your-) daughter on a stroll.
She frowned. Astrid only (-liked-) the cute talk when it
Until there was a (-loud-) roar and Astrid found herself
difficult to deal with, her temper (-flaring-) at any
(-Do-) visit Fellsdoon sometime, next week perhaps
suggestes to Mr. Haddock that you (-and-) I are... engaged.
proximity that it was quite (-probable-) that they already
begged her to (-stay-) the night, saying it was too
| Violin1st4 chapter 44 . 6/9
Hey! I am loving this book! I love that in HTTYD fanfictions no one seems to realise just how long recovering from an amputation takes. I have a friend who is an amputee and when she had the operation she was in crutches for a full on 9 months. (But hiccup is awesome and can do anything anyway so it doesn't matter). This is very well written though and I can't put it down! Thanks! :)
| larissa chapter 50 . 6/7
i have read sssooo many story and i have to say this is one of my top ten. Thank you for writing this story i love it so mush
| Ulcaasi chapter 18 . 6/9
CAMIIIIIIIIIIIII. At last. :3
and could have (-been-) quite pretty, if she had not suffered
It was bad enough (-that there were-) eight obnoxious
She ignored her mother, grabbing her (-shawl-) that was
She did not know if he (-was-) in there
Was this (-what-) Hiccup had been working on?
It had to (-be for-) her, it matched her eyes perfectly
She said finally. (-Her-) face was now heating up.
"Took (-your-) time, what were you doing? Planning a battle
as Astrid Hofferson, she suddenly felt (-self-conscious-)
| Vivi-ntvg chapter 50 . 6/9
Well, that was quite a bumpy ride, for the Hiccstrid and for the story as well... but overall I enjoyed the result!
And now I should really go to sleep because it's past 6 am now xD
| Ulcaasi chapter 7 . 6/8
I thought Toothless had green eyes ._.
Can't for them to find out the truth about each other hehehe
(-She/Astrid-) stared at him. "Are you bloody out of our mind?" she yelled.
(-She shook her head-)
(Whats with all the sudden bouts of first person?)
He said, frowning. He (-backed-) up. "Jump away."
Although her (-heart-) beat like it was prepared to jump
What did someone walk (-in-) on you?
find out the truth. You are not good at (-keeping-) secrets
| Vivi-ntvg chapter 20 . 6/7
You know that moment when you want to continue reading but you know that you have to go to bed or you'll be a zombie tomorrow? Well... xD
Anyway, I'm really enjoying this and I'll be back to reading it as soon as I can! :D *cough-tomorrow-cough*
| Ulcaasi chapter 3 . 6/7
THERE BE DRAGONS IN THIS AU? Had a feeling the moment the stables appeared.
(-Due-) to being rushed by the cold; she managed to get to Tadfield Manor
some of them were bought when my uncle (-was-) on a trading
"(-Your-) father is the one who is so picky about the stables?"
She swung off her (-shawl-) to press against her skirts to try to mop up the
| Ulcaasi chapter 2 . 6/7
... Is it just me or is there a lot more typos in this story. I'm asuming it's because your English has improved since.
She scrubbed herself dry and (-pulled/began pulling-) the dress on.
That was for standing out (-here-) like a pervert!
was caked in mud, a dreadful thought (-hit-) Astrid.
| Ulcaasi chapter 1 . 6/7
Given the circumstances I was expecting something like this. Doesn't make it any less funny.
and turning around, careful to not step (-in/on anymore-) mud,
She wouldn't risk (-entering-) the front gardens. Imagine that, a girl,