EXCELLENT -EXCELLENT !

your writing is incredible,,,, man, you can FEEL the emotions coming from the page

This amazing paragraph tugs at my heart every single time I read this story.

No Light, No Light Horror/Hurt/Comfort

uhhhhhhhhh

Thank youuuuu

Beautiful

Beautifully written

Thank you

This story completes perfectly chapters 95-99 of Dash Away. Very intense and very well written. Thank you.

Incredible story! Very intense! That had to be terrifying! I really enjoyed it!

I just finished re-reading 'Dash Away' for the first time in a couple of years because I realised I'd never read the rest of the series and I wanted to savour the whole thing from the beginning. This one was next in the list and... wow. Such an incredibly powerful piece of writing. So many perfectly chosen phrases and images in here, it kind of blew me away. It's also interesting that it took a similar moment of life and death in the actual show for Kate to get her priorities right. Very prescient of you! :)

I shall now move on to the rest of the series...

Wow. Wow. Wow.

Can I just leave it at that? Because seriously, you were able to show the darkest side of their story, and turning it into the brightest. It's an end that turned into a beginning, and you did it beautifully.

Oh, and the song? Amazing pick.

I don't have much more to offer you, except that I loved every word in this. Every word you chose so carefully to create this backstory. Wow, once again.

Amazing, of course! Great story, I'm glad for the history

Now I really understand what happened with that case with the Butcher that brought Rick and Kate together. Too bad it had to be that way. Despite the violence, you did a great job in showing the lengths that Rick would go to to get Kate away from the Butcher.

It was nice that the boys finally got to them.

The ending was wonderful as they were finally able to act on their feelings for each other even though they were still physically and probably a little bit emotionally hurt.

This was wonderful written dear! and after reading the Dash stories this fits so perfectly, because even if this story is brutal in a way, we know where it leads: to two beautiful kids and a life together, so all the pain they went through has a meaning, Kate need to almost lose it all to give up all the pretenses and, if you could say it this was, take what was hers: his love...

Holy hell! I did not expect that! Wow! It was terrible and brutal but so unbelievably awesome at the same time! I was totally *living* it and feeling everything! Wow!

I have to say I'm glad you didn't go into details that much. I love it 3

Holy crap that was amazing. I can't believe I've put off reading this series for so long. Loved this, so much. Especially the end, for ever. Ack. Gorgeous.