|Reviews for Living A Lie|
| fandomqueen18 chapter 18 . 5/4
I love your story! You should keep writing it. You're an amazing author!
| Annabeth chapter 18 . 4/24
I just found and read your story! It's great so far and I would love to see you finish it!
| Guest chapter 18 . 12/30/2016
Yay, an update! Albeit rather short, this was a great chapter- I especially loved Naomi's defiance towards Dabria. She deserved everything she got.
I won't lie, it saddens me to think that the story is coming to a close, but I've loved reading it and can't wait for the end at the same time, if that makes any sense.
Interesting that there's a lake monster, by the way. How did that happen?
Please update soon!
| SettingStars01 chapter 17 . 12/1/2016
I'm so excited about the update! I jumped around in y room for two minutes straight before I calmed down when I saw that there was another chapter. And I was not disappointed. Once again, your writing was worth the wait and this proved to be a very eventful chapter, which is always great. I'm really glad that Bryan is back, but it's understandable that Naomi has mixed emotions about it. And after Keith betrayed her as well-poor thing will be so guarded now! But I really hope that she will be able to open up and trust other people again. We'll see. Thank you so much for writing such a brilliant story. I'll keep my eyes peeled for the next update.
| hope79 chapter 10 . 11/25/2016
i really liked this chapter [good job!]
but i thought the recount of the patch/nora story included a lot of extraneous information - i understand that nora was trying to set the scene and not lie to her daughter, but for readers, it gets redundant and a lil boring, so i guess future advice would be to cut down on what readers already know and go into further detail on the new stuff
i absolutely LOVE naomi's character, but i think by enhancing her awesomeness, you downplayed everyone else's, especially patch's.
like, patch is this badass fallen angel; he wouldn't be surprised by a knife, even if it was thrown by his daughter...or (i think it was the last chapter) when all the adults were stunned by her mind tricking abilities
it's an AWESOME story, but these are just some things you can improve on :)
| hope79 chapter 9 . 10/17/2016
the beginning almost made me cry...
maybe you could make the chapters shorter...it seems a little intimidating to read, and it might be easier for you to update...
| SettingStars01 chapter 16 . 9/28/2016
Sorry that I haven't reviewed before but this is a really amazing fanfic and you deserve as many reviews as possible, so I thought I might as well...
I wish you'd update more but you're a fantastic writer and make up for the waiting with the chapters you post.
WHY DO YOU ALWAYS USE CLIFFHANGERS?! Please, please, please update or I think I may explode -_-
Also, is Bryan ever coming back or is he gone for good? Please update as soon as you can ;)
| hope79 chapter 8 . 9/27/2016
this chapter was so intense on so many levels it hurts
| hope79 chapter 3 . 8/8/2016
omg...maybe bryan was some guy who was sent to watch her by nora and patch...
| hope79 chapter 2 . 8/8/2016
if nora and naomi had hot bio partners, why can't i?
im so happy that vee and scott got married!
| hope79 chapter 1 . 8/8/2016
i already know that this is going to be an awesome story!
i can't believe NATCH had a baby!
and why isn't it safe?!
| Guest chapter 16 . 6/27/2016
Hi, I really like this story! Sooooo, when are you posting next?
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/7/2016
This is good so far I loved the hush hush saga I cried when Scott died but I cried even harder when patch could feel
| Renesmee27 chapter 15 . 2/29/2016
can't wait for the update! I completely understand 3
| hibonne chapter 14 . 1/15/2015
Hiii Alee! I love your story and i'm expecting the other chapters, pleasee release them soon! Sorry if my english is bad, im from Mexico.
i want to know what happen to Naomi, Bryan, Nora, Patch, Vee, Scott, etc.
Please i want to read.