|Reviews for Courting Assassins|
| Amu4ever chapter 2 . 4/13
I have to say your AN made me twitchy as heck. Please don#t talk down on your chapter like that. How are we supposed to enjoy it properly if the first thing we read is an eleborate babble about how it is no good?
Be more confident in your work. You are a good author, I liked the devilish way you wrote Altair in particular, so just accept how great you are and be done with it!
| Amu4ever chapter 1 . 4/13
Hahaha...these Desmond x Ancestors fics are so amusing :D
| Kitty-Chan UchiNaru no Miko chapter 1 . 9/19/2015
The first chapter should totally be subtitled "Malik is Long-Suffering".
| AngelxCloud chapter 2 . 3/30/2015
It does not suck! I love it *nosebleed*
| Black Bloody Rose Dragon chapter 2 . 3/11/2015
That hot XD it wasn't bad I liked it
| killer4853 chapter 2 . 9/25/2014
| Hack Generation chapter 1 . 7/26/2014
i foubnd yew senpaiii
| Hack Generation chapter 2 . 7/26/2014
oh yes desmond
he is a very good ass
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
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| InsaneAndHappyAboutIt chapter 2 . 1/31/2014
i think u're being too hard on uself. i personally really liked this! XD The first AND second chapter. X3 Nice work!
| YamiXYugiLover2899 chapter 2 . 1/7/2014
i love the back and forth witty comments that you portray between the characters. I also really appreciate that you have desmond being a strong submissive, not all fluffy and stereotypically "uke".
pacing in your story is strong and there is a great balance of dialog and action.
I can tell that you plan out what you are writing and I really appreciate that, it adds a level of description and humour that way :)
| TheFallensPresent chapter 2 . 12/31/2013
You shoyld write more. Just saying.
| nikaris chapter 2 . 12/17/2013
In all honestly, I'm not sure quite sure what you are worrying about. This was a lovely chapter and perhaps my favorite out of both chapters you've already posted for this story. When you say it took you forever to write this, you were right! Two years! Yet, I think it was worth it since this story is actually a fan favorite by various writers in this fandom. Thank you for not giving up on this story. After two years of this being up and alone, I was afraid that it was discontinued. I am glad that I was wrong.
Keep writing. :)
| The Fox Familiar chapter 2 . 12/16/2013
Again, we have a sick fuck who has no idea how male anatomy works.
The anus isn't a vagina, and if you finger it, you'll likely tear the anal wall and/or come back with faeces. Exposure to the anus by a penis can lead to anal tears, parasitic worms, and infection. But I guess you didn't know that because you were too busy picturing Altair raping his own ancestor. Family love and rape, hell yeah.
If you want a harem with your family and friends, go ahead, but don't think of writing it without people commentating on it. You're a sick fuck, end of discussion. If you enjoy rape, you can Google it.
| The Fox Familiar chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
Oh, wow, another token homosexual pornographic fic written by a twat who likes to get her cunny running.
You do realize Desmond and Altair are related, right? But no, that's okay - they're men, they're hot, you can't have them, so let's make them have hot fucking sex, FUCK YEAH!
"Annoyed Malik" - OH MY GOD, HOW FUCKING DEEP, MAN.
"If I get down to Altair raping Desmond" - If Desmond was a woman, you wouldn't support this, would you? But you're clearly okay with a man being raped by a homosexual because that is hot to you. Do you know what that makes you, Sarah? It makes you a sick fuck who gets off to seeing men being raped. And that makes you a rape lover, and you admitted it that you like it. So then I ask: what are you doing in America? A girl with infidelity as you would earn a good smack in Saudi Arabia. I think you'd look good over there.
And Altair is pretty much a rapist in this story. You really have no respect for men, do you, faglover?