|Reviews for What A Thief Can't Steal|
| The Writer Of Fate chapter 44 . 11/3/2013
This story, while fun in its own right, moves too quickly. You lack proper characterization because you won't slow down long enough to develop your characters. Heck, not even your plot is properly developed because you seem to be in a rush to finish the story.
In short, lots of promise, but ultimately hampered by the relentlessly fast pacing that prevents proper development of characters and plot.
Slow down, take a breath. It will not kill your story if you take a chapter or two after a major event to breathe and develop your characters and flesh out your plot.
| RebelliousElite99 chapter 15 . 9/15/2013
Okay, quick note as I'm in the middle of this awesome story.
OMFGWTFROFLMAOBBQ ROSExVENOM BANDIT I TOTALLY SHIP IT HUEHUEHUEHUE. (Don't wanna spoil his name now do we :P)
Shipping pairs aside, the story has obviously been well proofread (something a lot more authors should do _) and has great characters, plot, and everything. I will try to elaborate off of that once I finish the story. Loving it so far!
| Guest chapter 44 . 8/27/2013
Wow, great story. I dont have a fanfiction account (sadly) so i couldnt pm you. But i wanted you to know my pokemon black friend code is 3096-9019-9039. My name is Liam. I already registered you, and I want to battle! (by the way, do you have a Mew? it's the last legendary I need, and I can trade it for Arceus, i have 2.)
| Guest chapter 13 . 8/25/2013
How did blade fall asleep from dark void when he was already sleeping in the first place
| Guest chapter 21 . 6/19/2013
I just want to say that the strangest thing throughout this entire story is how Rose knows that Darkrai "Winked" at Cressila when he always has his *Hood/Hair* over his eye...
| Empyrean Philharmonic chapter 44 . 6/3/2013
Well! That was definitely a nice story to read! I meant to review it at an earlier time but I ended faving it as a reminder instead.
First off, I thought the characters were well-thought out. Rose certainly has her own charm, as well as Blade. Every other character (no matter how major or minor) had their own distinguishing roles I thought stood out against the rest of the characters in the story. In other words, no matter who the Pokemon was, he/she had their own defining characteristics that stood out against one another. Examples include personality and how characters talk (Blade is the most obvious). That's one thing I thought was done really well.
Second, the plot itself it great. I love how the tension slowly builds up in each chapter until the climax hits (around the last chapters). It seemed like a very smooth transition, almost like reading a shounen manga (I'm not sure if this is the best comparison because I'm don't know if you've read one).
Third, the shippings are all ADORABLE. (If I could italicize that word, I would but I can't so I CAPS locked it instead.) I've always thought Gardevoir and Gallade was a neat shipping in general. Other pairs like Masquerain/Flygon, Typhlosion/Ninetales are really nice touches (I know I can't list all of them but I don't have much space to type anyway.) That said, I thought this added a nice taste to the story in general, emphasizing the romance genre of the story (which is good for people who like romance, I think).
I can't really think of any complaints. The only thing that bothers me are the occasional typos considering that I read this whole story in one night, so it did bother me slightly. But I let it go, because for the most part it the grammar was good.
Anyways I hope that wasn't too long of a review. I'm usually one of those people who like to give really long reviews, and I try to put a lot of thought into them rather than just being vague and writing one-liners.
Thanks for giving me a nice story to read!
| PixieDustRed chapter 44 . 5/10/2013
Plz write the sequel! I'm beggin'!
| TS and Double-T Forever Strong chapter 37 . 4/24/2013
I FUCKING KNEW IT WAS JIRACHI! AARRRRGGH! DX WHY!? WHHHYYYYYYY!?
| RedManaphii chapter 44 . 4/24/2013
| NekoKitty13 chapter 44 . 12/26/2012
Sequel,Sequel,Sequel!I LOVED this story it was AWESOME And I think it deserves a sequel!
| Nightsoul-Knightmare chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
I loved all your chapters!
| XT3100 chapter 11 . 9/25/2012
THis is good why didnt i read it sooner
| pyroguardian-of-thewhiteflame chapter 44 . 9/8/2012
...Wow,there's only two words to describe this...absolutely perfect,I cannot fathom how well you have created this fic,i'm glad that you have made such an amazing fic.I hope you use that endless creativity for a sequel because I know if you do it might even surpass this one.n.m. the beta readerthis is just a habit.
| FreezeHaxz chapter 44 . 8/27/2012
This has been a wonderful Fanfic. I quite enjoyed most of it (you do need to work more on how your narrate battles since they did seem kind of bland to me :/ but that's just me) Well, great work on this and I really hope to see a sequel, which I predict will probably be centered more around Ivy since by the way you ended it with her point of view. anyways, great work and sorry for not reviewing earlier since I have taken a break from fanfiction. Hope we meet again!
| XxrandomdooderxX chapter 44 . 8/12/2012
there better be another! That was insanel good! There better be some magical story for the shiny with spade cards. That really confuse me. I've been following this story since... Chapter 11? Whatever it was I need to tell ya right now. You did an awesome job! I was always excited about when the next chapter would come out cause I think I loved the plot and the way you wrote it out. I always expected the virus to be something about mewtwo though! Anyways great job! Love this story to death! Thank you for writing!