Reviews for Ai Youkai |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really loved reading the story up until this chapter and I cannot wait for it to be updated again :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking forward to the next Chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Definitely looking forward to the chapters to come and hopefully maybe possibly some outside characters can get involved with the cast like Shizuka or Honoka... Shion would be funny lol hmm Fuu? Xo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this is terrible. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My only beef with this chapter... he could have summoned the Toads, no? Also just wondering, I'm guessing your aiming to not have Naruto talk with Kurama? With everything happening I'm sure at some point Kurama would've tried to speak with him by now with the new worlds and info Kurama probably didn't know... which brings me to the next thing... what about the other Jinchuriki's at this point? Also, again lol the other worlds, again I ask wondering if you plan to use them other than just these 2? hmmmm chap 32... almost caught up... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story! However, doesn't see like any other relationships outside Naruto cast so far which would be a missed opportunity. Again, I'm only on chap. 23 so don't know yet but I feel Morrigan or even Felicia would've been an interesting add on to this story so far. Darkstalkers mesh well here in my opinion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, the civilian council thing is definitely creepy. Who wouldn't wig out a little thinking the person they've known for years was some kind of plant? pun intended... |
![]() ![]() - Pollen That would indicate some type of plant based jutsu. Only one who'd seem capable of this type of intricacy would be Zetsu. Although the "why" eludes me, he didn't need those types of clones to manipulate other nations into say attacking Uzushiogakure. So why now and what was the motivation for this. - Harem Ino isn't wrong, technically he's already on the hook due to Jiraiya with Shizuka of Nadeshiko. And the other girls they mention might also want to throw their hat into the ring. So Harem does seem to be on the horizon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the update looking forward to the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is shorter then I personally like. However I am truly happy to see this update. Thank you for sharing it. I like the added search for Sasuke to make sure he was where they put him. I would have liked a little,ore with Neji and this girl Rin but overall a wonderful addition to the story so far thank you for the update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good filler. Makes you wonder who was manipulating things in Konoha. At least Naruto and the group are out of Hell. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent Chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome work and glad to see they are home, also welcome back :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. It's been a long time! Good to see a new chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One hell of a fight, resulting in Sarutobi getting to come back it seems. Well, unless something comes up that is. Guess we'll see, won't we? Nice chapter, nice work. Keep it up. |