Reviews for Educational
Sefera chapter 1 . 7/14/2018
If your reminiscing on the past, and you feel the need to draw attention to it, just put it in italics. If your adding a note onto a topic before continuing, and you feel the need to use parentheses, open one, (say what you want to say, and close one again.) If you feel the need to stack them, open one, (say something, open the second one, (say something else, close both.)) That's the grammatically correct way of doing it. The parentheses are after the space at the start of the thing your putting inside them, and after the period or other exclamation but before the space to the next sentence at the end. Although, towards the end when you were stating facts of no real relation you didn't actually need the parentheses. It just made it needlessly hard to read.

Please do not take this as malicious intent, or hate. I'm just trying to provide constructive criticism. I still thought the story was pretty cool though. I'm favoriting it, because I favorite everything I atleast vaguely enjoy.

It was a plenty good concept, I'm just reading my way down the list of MOR offshoots, so I've got the Cryptographic Key and Significant Digits on the mind right now.
ardvarkeating101 chapter 1 . 5/2/2017
This makes me so happy, reading something in this style after HPMOR officially ended.
The Anguished One chapter 1 . 9/28/2016
An excellent examination of how Draco is shaping up at this point of Methods of Rationality. I love this version of Draco, and you did a good job of portraying him.
WalkingInTalaria chapter 1 . 3/2/2016
I read this once. Then I had to read it again because I was laughing far too hard the first time to actually focus.

But, like Draco, I don't care. I'm going to stand back and let it all happen around me, because that is what a good scientist does, and also, like Harry, because I revel in chaos. Maybe that's why I was laughing so much.

I never knew education could be this fun.
HyperCatnip chapter 1 . 8/7/2015
This was amazingly funny and I enjoyed reading it.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/11/2015
This is a lovely little companion piece.
lemon-rind chapter 1 . 3/25/2015
I think I like the way you characterize Draco. Thanks for the oneshot.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
but if you added Granger into the equation it didn't seem at all as bad.
They should really get to gether. They really should. They reallyr eally really need to get together.
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
Hilarious. Thanks.
jdboss1 chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
This was really while Put togetherIt came pretty close to the original at A couple of times
pondpbls chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
What a lovely piece into Draco's mind as he tries to figure out all the mayhem caused by Harry! I loved the bit with Draco and Goyle, it was very sweet and a great moment to reflect on Draco's development - nicely captured. And Draco, I think you totally hit the spot with his characterization; the use of brackets for layered thoughts really helped with seeing how Draco is struggling to think his way through it all. A wonderful one-shot!
Random number generator chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
I will repeat previous reviewer: "I don't know why, but I found your nested parentheses to be terribly amusing."
G01den Unicorn 11 chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
I don't know why, but I found your nested parentheses to be terribly amusing.
Lewis The King chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
Nice story, I liked it.
Devil Reader chapter 1 . 10/25/2012
HA! That's exactly how I was thinking about reading what was going through Harry's mind. I thought most of the reasons for everything Harry was doing was because he wanted to know what would happen. I doubt that Harry was doing because it's educational though.
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