Still can’t figure what room they are reading in or why they are hanging out after their argument. Hermione left and two hours later they are in his sitting room?

Emasclio? How the hell did he deserve that?

I know I'm late, but I recently started started this story and I can't help but say I loved almost every aspect of it. All the attention to detail that made me feel like I was there to witness it, the intense Severus and Hermione moments, those plotting witches that made me want to join them, Sirius and Ailie instantly bonding over their mischief. It felt like you were building up to something intense, but somehow the balloon just deflated in the last two chapters. I hope one day you'll decide to look back on this and give us a different (and hopefully longer) ending. Other than that, the story was wonderful. Glad I discovered it!

I love your disclaimers! I swear I’ve been laughing my head off at all of them, but I finally broke on this one. Keep ‘em comin’!

Lo siento, pero no puedo leer más - hace tiempos que no me ha topado con un personaje tan irritante, insensato y antipático como Aili

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aw man that ending was savage! beautiful... but blooming savage!

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Amazing story. So glad I found it. I had tears in my eyes

Snape got plaaaaaaaaaaaaayed. lol

Wooooo. Go Hermione!

at any mention of a "jealous snape"...im sold!

I seriously wonder at how you can get so many names wrong... but there than that this story is wonderful.
For the record Ginny is Ginevra, Sprout is Pomona, Hooch is Rolanda and Flitwick is Filius.

For this i wasted 2 days reading? You are a cruel one.

I did enjoy all but the ending. It was long and drawn out.

You are a talented writer.

Thanks for writing.

This story was amazing up until the final two chapters. I feel like you were fed up with writing and just thought up a quick and emotional ending to an otherwise well planned and thought out story.

Everything I loved about your story, the slow buildup, the attention to detail, the different characters and realistic dialogue, was kind of lost in the last two chapters. I feel you did yourself a disservice ending this so abruptly. I would, for example, have liked to read about the moments after the war when Hermione and Severus are 'reunited' of a sorts and they share the memories Hermione saved.

Aside from the rather abrupt ending I found this a good read.

Not sure about the ending. It felt a bit out of the blue. Enjoyed the rest of the story though so thanks for sharing!