It's been a long time since I've cried over a ending

wow she's got an evil streak

Well written story, sometimes a bit lengthy. I'd have been happier with a less shocking non-happy end.

Kind of an ubrupt ending and a dissapointing epilogue.

Lovely.

Sting title, yeah!

I don't understand how Ailie could be treated so benignly for her mischief. I would think Dumbledor would be much angrier with her, and she should have received a harsher censor for her actions. I really don't like her at all, and wish she would go back from where she came from, the immature chit. She, at the very least, needs a man to give her prolonged comeuppance and perhaps a spanking would not be amiss. Evil little witch with a B...

I started reading this in an attempt to lull me to sleep, but it turned out to he a futile attempt - I haven't put my phone down since I started reading at midnight and it's currently 3:30 pm.

your writing is amazing and i find myself thirsting for a sequel or at the very least to know what happened to them that Hermione found herself with those thoughts running through her head.

I don't get it. It was all so sudden. I was loving this story, and suddenly it killed me. You write so very well, why would you do that? It broke my heart.

Why would I want to read something that ends so badly?

Don't waste your time reading this story, totally unsatisfying, ends ubruptly, bleh.

These las two chapters where so sad, they where not just not a happy ending but an angst ending.

This last chapter had tears silently falling down my checks.
I I total do not recognize these last two chapters, even through at the same time, I can't help remembering them.
So a well written story if your aim was to make it unbearably sad.

I really hope Hermione finds that cure.

I love this story and that last line was brilliant!
I loved the emotion of 'because your mine'. It's a great line and I better their are a lot of writers who wished they thought of it first. So well done.

What a beautiful story.
You are right.
...*Never...' No, Severus is never thanked by all those that owe their, life, health , sanity, talents to his loyal, grouchy, diligent care. He is superb in his taking care of others. No wonder he seemed tired aand disspirited at the end. Do people really have to be popular and 'Awsomely' pretty and cute to earn the right, to be 'able' to recieve gratitude? What a saccharine Disney- movie- set our world is becoming , then...
Especially the Head nurse, who recieves Hundreds of potions for free for her sickbay every week , every day; A. D. who mocks and belittles his true authority, and scoffs at his realistic warnings,
; Minerva who is a terrible 'friend', that rarely tries to look behind th spy's mask. Where are his true friends? His is a rather lonely and sad life. Brilliance, native talent burned in a quest to keep striving for the acts that need to be done.

still not sure why Ailie needs revenge. Revenge on what? Being saved? Honestly I'm starting to feel like Snape has a point- those two girls are children and need to grow up and get over themselves.