Reviews for What Should Never Be
Guest chapter 1 . 1/2
Absolutely brillant! Definitely left me wanting more!
centava chapter 1 . 5/14/2014
Fantastic erotica, coupled with a heartbreaking story. I love sexy, confident Harry, so well done there. Perhaps you'd continue it, even with an epilogue, someday?
CelestiaNight chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
Please, for the love of Merlin, let there be more!
Alijandra's Editor chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
Really, that was great - I love the mental struggle that Draco is plagued with. Please, make a sequel or second chapter for this story! I know a lot of stories end open-ended, leaving the reader to speculate certain aspects of a story, or mentally create their own version of their preferred ending. However, I'm begging that you complete this one for the readers. :D

You're a wonderful writer, in all the fics that I've read of yours so far - not, solely, in your ability to draw the reader into your written words, creating a story-world of directly and precisely conveying a character's emotions, surroundings, and thoughts - making them seem all the more real, to the reader - but, also, structurally and grammatically, as well!

Thank you for all the hard work you've put into these fics - it's greatly appreciated! ;)

Sw33tCh3rryP13 chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
Please, please write a sequel to this! Something happy! I can't stand the heartbreak... :(
walkingby521 chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
So his note said that they couldn't ever be? Or that they should meet weekly-hell, daily-for a shag? I want them to end up together! Screw his future bride!
Sheri Contrary chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
Most definitely selfish of Harry, but...good God, I'm thankful he's doing it! )

I love that you've made Draco the inexperienced one (and the bottom)...more fics have it the other way around and this is nice to see. )

Draco's first reaction was utter disgust. Harry had just had a mouthful of Draco's semen, and there was just something wrong about tasting yourself. *~*~*~* adult daughter and I were JUST talking about this last night. How do you tell your nineteen-year-old that it's not disgusting and that she'd better get over that hang-up? Hmm.

That was great! Sad, because Draco's going off to get married when he doesn't want the woman (whoever she is...Astoria?), is what it is, right? He's made his choice, regarding the life he thinks he has to have, and that's that. *sigh*

Okay...comments for this DONE! Go UPDATE that other one! :p
Origami Fangs chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
Ahhh this was so fantastic and so hot! Please please please write more!xxx
Origami Fangs chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
Ahhh this was so fantastic and so hot! Please please please write more!xxx
olciak123 chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
SuperCali chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
Great! I mean, boon obviously bc Draco is being cowardly, but the fic was great.
magialuna chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
This is so hot... but so sad.

Have you ever considered writing a sequel to it? Something about the time when Draco gives up on his marriage and goes back to Harry?

Beautifully done though.

babyluw chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
This was absolutely beutiful. Painful sure, but still gorgeous 3 3 lots of love.
mochiusagi chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
That was amazing! And so sad! I mean, it feels complete and yet there's the lingering 'what if'. Regardless, I would love to see more!
Buttercup-chan chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
You should totally add more to this. You've marked it as complete so i don't know if you're still trying to decide whether to add on, but regardless my vote is cast. seriously keep writing haha.
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