|Reviews for The Broken Binding|
| The White Leopard chapter 3 . 9/26
I do love a good fairy tale. The cursed black prince and the traveling girl certainly lived up to expectations. I do wonder why Hawke only transformed into a little girl and not any of the other stages of the main character's life and it's surprising that the book didn't provide any other characters in the real world, but hey. Maybe it was running low on juice after all those centuries.
| whrr.trudy chapter 3 . 9/12
aww that was cute, thank you for sharing :)
| Kurai Ummei chapter 3 . 10/25/2015
| RogueMetamorph chapter 3 . 11/26/2014
Oh my God. This story was absolutely beautiful. (To be honest, I was skeptical at first because I didn't like your Hawke's personality... except when she was being sweet on Fenris. No one could dislike anyone who is sweet on Fenris.) However, as soon as she changed, the story really got me sucked in. I wanted Fenris to find Marian and protect her, I wanted to see him care for her, I wanted to see little Marian running around, I wanted to see them find a way to turn her back. What was probably my absolute favorite part was the part with Anders. I didn't expect a scene like that and I absolutely loved it. The cold hard truth that Anders lays out between then and the line; "People like you and me... we don't get happy endings," OH MY GOODNESS, it killed me. I had feels all over the place. It stung so bad and I just wanted to cry. And then Fenris's determination afterward? My goodness I love how you write him! Great story. I'm so happy I found it. Easily one of the best stories I've found for DA2 so far. *falls on the floor happy* Great job! Thank you for writing it!
| cherrychopstix chapter 3 . 7/2/2013
It's perfect. I want to cry at the beauty of it, and I apologize at my inadequacy of words t describe it, but there simply may not be any.
I loved the dual story, and all the characters, and the evolution of Fenris along with the Black Prince.
So refreshing, and rejuvenating for the mind. Equal goodness of emotions, fantasy, and idealism. Perfect.
| elfgirl931 chapter 3 . 6/12/2013
This literally brought tears to my eyes. The story of the mabari was so perfect it could have been a codex entry in the actual game!
You have a true and beautiful talent. I really loved reading this
| Decidedly Odd chapter 3 . 1/3/2013
You have such a gorgeous writing style, with really beautiful imagery. I typically don't like stories written in the present tense but it works very well here.
| GlysMari chapter 3 . 12/17/2012
"Happily ever after" "The End" *sigh* :))
| GlysMari chapter 2 . 12/17/2012
This is the absolutely, oh-so-very, very best fairy tale I have ever read; of which I have absolutely truly read oh-so-very, very many. :D
| Silvanna Nightlight chapter 3 . 9/19/2012
This is a very original story! I really like it. Keep writting :):):):)
| naomis8329 chapter 3 . 4/30/2012
Another wonderful story that had me smiling at Marian's antics and the wonderful Fenris trying to deal with a 6 year old lol.
A tornado as an adult a hurricane as a child me thinks :)
I can't help wondering where Sebastian is. I've read a few of your stories now and he isn't mentioned in any of them. Is this intentional? Is there a reason you do not write him in?
In any case, a lovely story of a fairy tale within a story and I must thank you again.
| Demon-Dragoness chapter 3 . 3/1/2012
This is by far one of the best things I have ever read! The Mabari Prince was a wonderful tale and I enjoyed reading every word. The prince turned into a mabari hound and only when he truly cares for someone enough to save their life he becomes a man again.
I feel like it's a proper fairytale that I have known since I was a child even though I have only just read it 3
The Broken binding was fabulously well written and I loved it just as much as the Mabari prince.
| Nichalia chapter 3 . 2/8/2012
| MistEternal chapter 3 . 2/3/2012
This was an amazing story! Very sweet and very well written. You've definitely nailed all the characters and Fenris especially.
| PenguinRegina chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
"I doubt Darktown had this hidden between the Antivan brandy and moldy scarves."
LMAO! You killed me with that! Who IS hiding all that brandy and skanky scarves?