|Reviews for The All Seeing I|
| abbyweyr chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Nice look at Twilight from Charlie's pov. He is so often overlooked. Thanks for sharing.
| twificfan chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
This was a very believable POV, I really liked it.
| grandn chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
That was delightful to read. An interesting view to the story.
| Lady Dragona chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
I loved this look at Twilight trough Charlie's eyes. I think he gets ignored far to often in these.
| karenec chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
I loved this entry. The whole time I read, I thought, 'It's always the quiet ones, eh?' Getting a look at the events of Twilight from Charlie's eyes was a treat and you handled his voice so well. His insecurities with regard to being a dad and the way he talked himself through them were particularly good.
| TwiCarol chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
I have a soft spot for Charlie & I loved this o/s of yours SO much. Great writing. Thanks for sharing. :)
| tweetytweets chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
u deserved d winning:)
| annaharding chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
This was an awesome look at Charlie's mind - thanx so much!
| Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
Cute story. Made me LOL a lot. :-D
| KayMarieXW chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
Congratulations on placing in The Canon Tour. This was a great entry and I'm happy it got the recognition it deserved.
Brilliant story. I've always loved Charlie and I feel like you've really captured him here. The writing style and his blunt sentiments fit perfectly. I love how protective he is of Bella.
Thanks for writing,
Love Kay x
| katmom chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
This was such a joy to read! Never enough Charlie!
Congrats on the win!
Thanks for sharing!
| twilightobsessed40873a chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
You so gotta love Charlie.
| jilburfm chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
I really enjoyed your entry! Congrats on your placement. I always love when non-E&B centric fics place in contests!
Here's my C&P'd review:
fun peek into charlie
Wow, sorry it was so lame. I read most of the entries on my phone and I tend to be very brief when I'm working on that touch screen.
That said, I love these parts:
* when he unclipped her battery cables.
* when he really hoped she didn't have a sex life
* when he worried about buying tampons or other, "er, bits and pieces"
| duskwatcher2153 chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
A wonderfully authentic Charlie voice-absolutely spot-on! Great job!
| TraciSnow chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
I loved this! It is EXACTLY the way I've always pictured Charlie. I love that we were able to see his feelings on everything from the first book.