Reviews for May I have this dance?
Orange-Coyote chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
Love this. :D
spawater chapter 2 . 11/20/2011
I understand why you would think the ending incomplete, but I wouldn't know what you should add...

Anyway, this second chapter was heart-warming. I already felt better when I read about James descending the stairs with an idea for a prank in his mind - it just seemed to sweet that he still had those even though his parents died, if you get what I mean? You've done this very beautifully, both the dead-parents and the I-fancy-Lily part. 3
barefoottoes chapter 2 . 11/14/2011
I loved it how Lily was able to comfort James! That's good!
amyrebekah.xo chapter 2 . 11/13/2011
AW ! i actually really enjoyed that so much !

even if you didn't enjoy the ending, i certainly did !
nyxaurora chapter 2 . 11/13/2011
Your ending was wonderful, hon. Don't let it bother you.
tori chapter 2 . 11/13/2011
Ymca! I loved it!
jamesxlily chapter 2 . 11/13/2011
love this story!it's awesome!

-Violet-chan~
spawater chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
Aawh, poor James. Very, very well written, can't wait for the second part.