|Reviews for True Despair|
| TheBronzeLine chapter 12 . 11/5/2017
My shit filter is full.
1. Pacing is horrible
2. Characterization is so screwed up
3. Your forcing of the ship and not allowing the characters to live their own lives (must be hard for you to understand)
4. Dialogue is mechanical and stale
5. Characters are OOC
This is *not* a well-written fic and it's unfortunately not just opinion: it's fact.
| TheBronzeLine chapter 10 . 11/5/2017
I hate it when the author forces the ship. It's unnatural, breaks immersion and cheapens the entire fic knowing this is the whole point of the story's existence: shipping fodder.
| Yurushimo The Forgiving Dragon chapter 7 . 6/13/2017
Shiro (Hollow Ichigo) doesn't attack his comrades when he gains control. He attacks the enemy until they die. I don't think you understand that here...
| Yurushimo The Forgiving Dragon chapter 6 . 6/13/2017
Really? A tentacle strike? That's how he faints? Wow...
| Yurushimo The Forgiving Dragon chapter 5 . 6/13/2017
DEMONIC! HOW MANY TIMES ARE YOU GOING TO SAY DEMOTIC!? IT'S LIKE YOU CAN'T SEE THAT'S THE WRONG WAY TO SPELL DEMONIC!
| shadow spirit55 chapter 13 . 1/27/2016
I hope you continue with this story! To me its well written don't let anyone tell you otherwise! Hopefully you update soon and I know I'm a year to late or so.. Sorry lol (*.*)
| chris kidder chapter 13 . 6/25/2015
keep on writing
| Kumo-No-Kuro chapter 13 . 3/30/2015
Tch I think you are a amazing author and you should continue this story
| Kumo-No-Kuro chapter 4 . 3/30/2015
Tch stop doubting yourself
| SakuraKoi chapter 10 . 11/21/2014
| SakuraKoi chapter 9 . 11/21/2014
| SakuraKoi chapter 8 . 11/21/2014
| SakuraKoi chapter 7 . 11/21/2014
| SakuraKoi chapter 6 . 11/21/2014
| SakuraKoi chapter 5 . 11/21/2014