|Reviews for Domain of the Holy Girl|
| BenoitRen chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
Reading the title made me go: "Laya, the Holy One!" like how this one NPC refers to Zio in Phantasy Star IV.
I appreciate the return of your more detailed, 'poignant' environment descriptions. You also made the effort of describing Laya in great detail. You Laya fanboy, you. ;)
Speaking of characters, I see you tried to make them more interesting. Nial questions Orakio's Law, Laya has a conflict between being herself and being Laya, and Ryan has his wit. But Miyu is still a sexist savage.
Overall, I enjoyed reading this nicely paced story.