Reviews for Through the Veil
Ayaashi chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
That's great! )
sock-feet-and-stirring-sand chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
Very nice!
MischiefManaged007 chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
This was perfect! I loved your style of writing and I felt like it was very realistic and true to character. Great job!
Minna26 chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
This was a really good story! Great idea! :) Well done!
lovewar66 chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
I always thought he'd cuss his cousin out afrter he fell through.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
Nice, but the reason 2nd POV is so rare is because FFn does not permit it. Stick to 1st or 3rd next time if you want to avoid getting reported.
iamnumbernine chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
That was really good! I liked the 2nd person POV
Dimcairien chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
Great job. Second person certainly is interesting to read. I do find it ironic that Sirius is killed by a curtain.