|Reviews for Pancake Night|
| FXL chapter 16 . 7/20/2012
This entire story was really good and funny. I really loved the jokes in each chapter. So glad I found this story! :D
| GrowlyNoir chapter 16 . 4/22/2012
-"Harold, calm down. Vince love Harold. No one understand why. Maybe Vince have tumor. Stop being such a ballbag."-
Bollo may have to do this on a regular basis.
-Howard tried to be casual as he slid his arm around Vince's waist. Vince shamelessly snuggled into Howard's side like a cat-
And didn't get pushed away or ordered not to touch. Cute.
| GrowlyNoir chapter 15 . 4/22/2012
-Howard held Vince in a mock-possessive embrace, "You, sir, are taken."
Vince snorted, "Everyone already knew that. Everyone but you, ya berk."-
You'll have to keep reminding him, Vince.
| GrowlyNoir chapter 14 . 4/22/2012
-Vince stood as well, clutching his zoo jacket and Killeroo flier.-
Thank goodness! The jacket is where it belongs.
-Howard had simply stood up and looked down at Smith until the boy wet his trousers and ran.-
I can just imagine this. Howard knows how to GLARE.
-"It scares me to love you so much, it always has,"-
What could possibly go wrong now?
| GrowlyNoir chapter 13 . 4/22/2012
-I think you use that nickname to infantalize Vince and I to remind yourself we aren't appropriate sexual partners."-
He's hit the nail on the head.
-It occurred to Sebastian they were now holding hands and gazing into each other's eyes at a cafe.-
| GrowlyNoir chapter 12 . 4/19/2012
-"Nothin'. He's a ballbag. I was just trying to think of something nice to say for your sake."-
How very Boo. While he doesn't hate Howard like Bollo does, he only really tolerates him to please Vince.
| GrowlyNoir chapter 11 . 4/19/2012
-Hey, that pink thing is watching.-
AHA! Humour with H-Man. I've been waiting. I did warn Seb to be afraid & of course wherever Saboo goes...
-"I'm sorry about the jackets," Howard whispered between kisses, "I'm sorry I made you cry. I'm sorry I made you feel stupid."-
A long, overdue apology. I'm glad the truth has come out and that it was an accident. This piece of Howard cruelty had me really fuming, more than the Seb incident.
| GrowlyNoir chapter 8 . 4/18/2012
-"That's just Tony Harrison," Vince offered helpfully-
I thought so ; )
-Howard could be a wanker but he didn't deserve to be psychoanalyzed by a stoned American. No one needs that.-
I laughed at that. But Seb seems like a nice guy after all.
I can't believe how insensitive Howard was about the zoo. It was Vince's paradise, but of course he put his beloved Bollo first.
| GrowlyNoir chapter 7 . 4/18/2012
-"It's a head! Oh my God, Howard! Help me, there's a head!"-
Is it pink with tentacles? Be afraid, Seb. Be VERY afraid.
-Vince found himself giggling. Howard's face immediately turned cold.-
Oh no, not again! It just shows that Vince is happy/nervous. It isn't meant to hurt, but Howard always assumes the laughter is AT him.
| GrowlyNoir chapter 6 . 4/18/2012
The best way for a Noir to torture himself is to start thinking. If Howard hadn't gone after him, I shudder to think what might have happened.
I'm sure Bollo would be happy to throw Sebastian out.
| GrowlyNoir chapter 5 . 4/18/2012
-Howard loved him and that was more than enough for Vince.-
But now Vince's whole world has just fallen apart, thanks to that hateful Seb. No "Don't Touch Me!" for him.
I liked how their younger selves bonded over the drawing & Vince wanting to have Howard's coat, but not recognising his crush.
And now I'm feeling CRUSHED.
| GrowlyNoir chapter 4 . 4/18/2012
-"Howard's not on the menu."-
-Vince wanted to stab the younger man with a fork.-
Not that Vince cares, but this Seb is outstaying his welcome.
If he gets his straighteners out...
| GrowlyNoir chapter 3 . 4/18/2012
-"My Zooniverse jacket? You chucked my Zooniverse jacket?"-
Howard! Seb had better give it back. Vince will treasure that jacket more than anything else in his wardrobe.
-"Me Bollo. This, Naboo. We live with precious and beautiful Vince and big ballbag Harold."-
Keepers of the Noir. Watch yourself, Seb.
| GrowlyNoir chapter 2 . 4/17/2012
-He ducked to avoid being hit by a pink pith helmet sent flying at his head.-
I chuckled here.
-"Why are you giving my clothes to strangers?"-
Be sure your sins will find you out, Howard.
Welcome to the madhouse, Sebastian.
| GrowlyNoir chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
The thoughts and dialogue in this chapter are perfectly in character and entertaining. Both clearly oblivious at this point, not in denial.
-"You have a friend coming over?... "You're not mad I knicked your bookmark?"
Vince's confusion/disbelief over Howard displaying un-Howardy behaviour is very cute. After all he's the Howard expert.