Reviews for Love Changes You: The Eagle and the Snake
WanderingDemoiselle chapter 2 . 11/24/2011
Its not dull at all. The tension is fantastic enough to carry you on. We all know who she's dreaming about.
WanderingDemoiselle chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
Parkinson infected. :D Oh delicious tension please give me more.
sweaterweather21 chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
This is new territory for me, as I haven't read too many Draco/Astoria fics. Your characterization of Daphne is interesting; she's usually pictured as the Slytherin Ice Queen, but you've taken it to a personal level since Astoria is her sister.

The bit about Bertie Bott's Every Flavor Beans was cute and I liked the scene with Draco at the end very much.

Nice chapter :)
XxXIamaroleplayingfangirlXxX chapter 5 . 11/23/2011
Wow, this_is_awsome! :)
LooneyLockhart chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
very nice!

I would have never thought of these two together:)

Keep up the good work!
Mischiefer chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
This story was awsome ;)
IchbinTraeumer chapter 5 . 11/20/2011
*gasp*

This. Story. Is. AWESOME!

I'm at a loss for words! :)
ShatterEveryWindow chapter 5 . 11/19/2011
Yes! Finally! The romance is here! Obviously as a T-on secnod thought, if anyone really wants to know then they should just check out my profile as to why I've been waiting for the romance. But seriously, I loved it, and I especially liked that you didn't take the kiss to extremes, and just kept it simple. Short and sweet...until that retard Malfoy decides to ruin it by running away, but still. Can you spell 'amazing'? Anticipating the next chapter! :) (VICIOUSLY anticipating, at that!)
iHeartE.D chapter 4 . 11/19/2011
Such a fun chapter! My only concern was the transition from Hogsmeade to Slughorn's potion class...I got a tiny bit confused there. Other than that, well done.
iHeartE.D chapter 2 . 11/19/2011
I really don't see how you think it's a dull story. I've actually enjoyed the first two chapters. You're very good at dialoguge, which is something I have a hard time with myself, but sometimes it got confusing. You're juggling four characters at one time. You don't have to have all of them say something in one chapter or sequence. In any case, this was well done.
iHeartE.D chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
I actually thought this chapter was really well done by means of introduction. It's a really good look into what might happen next and the bit at the end with Draco was a good change. You captured his 'tortured soul' quite nicely but in a way that wasn't too perplexing.
IsabellaMarieSnape chapter 5 . 11/18/2011
awww...poor Astoria...I can't wait until Draco comes around :)

great job, keep up the good work! :D
LunaBeth203 chapter 5 . 11/18/2011
whoa...wow...DRACO! that was so cute! aww I loved it so much! and he saved her life and then...ran off? is he like Harry and doesn't want to put her in danger? oh and I hope Harry is still the BEST seeker in Hogwarts because he ALWAYS will be to me!
UmbraLunae chapter 5 . 11/18/2011
I love it, Astoria has so much spunk, so clearly a Ravenclaw. And the Love-Hate relationship, which i'm seeing, makes it hard to see around the corner. Continue with this story, it's so nice!
PinkRose111 chapter 2 . 11/18/2011
Good chapther too. I'm so glad you asked me to read it, it's brilliant. Your writing is great, not to plain, not too complicated. You use the right amount of commas and semi-colons and stuff, and i really like that. Keep on writing!
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