Reviews for The Color Red
francis2 chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
This is truly painful to read. Poor Steve even more than poor Danny.
wotumba1 chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
great idea to play with the color!
ladylockern chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
Your story is extremly discriptive and catches your attention well. Just a few suggestions. 1/ leaving the injuries so vague makes it difficult on the reader. What kind of injuries are causing the extreme bleeding and such a drastic change to his life. 2/ Know the characters just a tad better. You had the doctor make a comment that Danny would never surf again for instance like this is an important part of his life however Danny in the new seiries hates surffing only learning for his daughter. Not being able to pick her up for example would have been more meaningfull then surfing or swimming examples from the doctor. But as I said over all WOW