|Reviews for Saviour|
| S. Isaac chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
My first thoughts at seeing this story wer something along these lines: "Do my eyes deceive me? A story on Ys!"
So kudos to you for writing the first Ys fanfic ever on fanfiction online.
On with the review then!
Despite some gramar issues it's not as hard to understand as you made it out to be. The plot is just getting started so theres not a whole lot to comment on that front.
Overall, it was a nice start, specially considering it was your very first story. Keep updating and good luck with the next chapter.