Reviews for Food Fight
Jaimie576 chapter 3 . 4/11
It really seemed natural, like their fighting was just them misunderstanding themselves and changing their love for each other into hatred, at the start it already seemed like their was tension between them, he'll even in the anime it sometimes seems like that. This is an awesome story.
kanyon01 chapter 2 . 4/3
woah. that was some damn intense porn for a first timer. I don't particularly like smutt..but your still great at writing it, even I can admit that
kanyon01 chapter 1 . 4/3
I planned to spend my whole day watching various anime and I ended up reading lol congrats
I sure do hope you get back to writing eventually, I noticed that the last time you updated anything was sometime last year..what a shame. your amazing at writing.
but holy shit that was intense where did that come from omg some thirsty guys there lmao
mirrorimage33 chapter 3 . 12/15/2013
Are you sure that was your first time writing smut? It was quite good -very- for a first time. If you hadn't said it was your first, I'd have thought you wrote the stuff all the time. :) You did wonderful.
crinwell chapter 3 . 8/12/2013
Really great work - love it!
For your forst time its just awesome - cant wait for some other Gratsu stuff of you!
YokuMiya chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
I think Erzas gonna kill them for the cake and Lucys gonna kill them for not cleaning up.
Guest chapter 3 . 5/1/2013
You've been doing really good, congratulations! )
Although I'm a huge NatsuxLucy shipper - but it was a great fanfiction and a part of me ships them now because of you ;D
Guest chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Stop making me ship this pairing! :D
It's good so far, and I'll continue reading ))
Izzywing chapter 3 . 3/13/2013
Awwww, what a cute story! I can't wait to read some of your other story's!
ansjovisjj chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
cake... pink and blue... see what you did there ;P
LunaFaustus chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
LOVE IT! ;D
Emerald-Pen chapter 3 . 1/6/2013
This was a really good story!;)
RinNeko636 chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
Way too perverted
lovekills chapter 3 . 10/30/2012
Ya i liked it YOUI FOREVER!
chakreatni chapter 3 . 9/28/2012
love love love it write more nastuxgray please
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