|Reviews for The Bet|
| biffborax chapter 10 . 12/24/2013
This was an AWESOME story! Unfortunately, I got really annoyed with the incorrect grammar, such as 'to' when it's supposed to be 'too'. I am really sorry, but I really love English and grammar and all that, considering I'm a total bookworm. I look forward to more stories. (Please don't take my comments in a bad way... sorry.)
| biffborax chapter 6 . 12/24/2013
In all the chapters, it says Ritsu's name is "Onaderu". It is actually "Onodera"! Sorry if I'm being rude... it just annoys me when stuff like this happens.
| Sekaifangirl83 chapter 7 . 11/20/2013
Ok...ok...I hate this. This by far is the worst I've read. How did you go for SEVEN DAMN CHAPTERS using the wrong last name?! It's Onodera not Onoderu! And Yokozawa was never that damn possessive over Takano! You are clearly are making out An to be a clingy slut and pisses me off! I can't even try to finish it.
| na-ka-ma284 chapter 9 . 7/28/2013
Actually I think that the 9th chapter disappeared. It's a pity since there is a huge gap now between the chapters. Could you do something about this?
| Kanata chapter 10 . 5/1/2013
How cute! What an awesome ending _
| SeverusDmitri18 chapter 10 . 1/18/2013
Fascinating. More chapters?
| The-Peek-A-Boo-Bunny chapter 7 . 12/14/2012
i know un probably being a creeper but a lil note
takano ND yokozawa are actually on the same lvl they are not boss and sub they are even height on the chart :$
| The-Peek-A-Boo-Bunny chapter 3 . 12/14/2012
next chapter all hell will break loose XD
| Fujoshi-dono chapter 3 . 12/12/2012
I have a question. Why is it Onaderu? Not Onodera? O_O
| LoverMolly-Chan chapter 9 . 12/11/2012
HIIIIIIIIIIIIIII! Mrs. Cousin Fumina-san! XD
| LoverMolly-Chan chapter 8 . 12/11/2012
T_T BWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! I'm seriously crying. How do authors do it? Oh, and if ur still looking for an editor I'll gladly help. _ though I'll have to check with my school work. I'm a freashman in High school -_- ... God, I'm a Perv. -_-'
| MercySummer chapter 10 . 10/9/2012
omigosh, i cried while reading the whole thing so now i have a pile of tissues next to ma bed on the floor ;-; but it was just so... idk good? it was great, awesum, i loved it.
| Amy chapter 10 . 8/17/2012
One word : GREAT !
| Amy chapter 2 . 8/17/2012
The script is ok and the idea is really good. I think it's one of the better fanfics I've already read. Thank you for the work. (I'm french and I get everything I read so it's cool, I hope you understand what I've write too). :)
| Envyyyy chapter 10 . 8/17/2012
Lol poor yokozawa xD made me cry in chapt 8 tho. You evil person xD