|Reviews for House of Cards|
| Guest chapter 67 . 7/17/2016
i love your story so far! i'm just waiting for riku to be all badass and fighting tho.
| randomSWEDISHperson chapter 125 . 9/28/2015
Wow. I'm completely mindblown. This story was just amazing.
So, I started reading this quite a while ago, when it was still in progress, but because of real life stuff taking up almost all my time, I sort of forgot about it until about two weeks ago when I rediscovered your account here - and this story with it. And I am SO glad I did.
This story is probably the first fanfic I've read that 1) made me ship a OC/Canon pairing, 2) Sink that ship into the ground, 3) Manage to keep me from leaving the story after that, and 4) Make me ship ANOTHER OC/Canon pairing. So good job on that. The characterizations are great, the story is awesome, a bit too much body swapping filler here and there, but overall this is probably one of the best fanfics I've ever read - and it's definitely the one with the best OCs. Seriously.
I really don't know how to express just how happy I am that this story exists, or that I got to read it. For the last two weeks, I've been spending at least 80% of my spare time reading this and now that I'm done with it I'm not really sure what to do. I guess I'll just have to go read something else of yours... Still, I doubt anything can top this story. It's just amazing.
| Chocobo-14 chapter 125 . 9/12/2013
And so ends a great story. While I'm sad to see it end, it couldn't have gone on forever. This was a very unique experience, one that I enjoyed very much. I'm a bit disappointed that we never really found out what was up with the Ten of Swords, but I guess it doesn't matter. Riku and Leo finally got out of the game, and found each other outside. I suppose that's all I could ask for. Thank you very much for writing this. It is definitely one of the better stories I've read on this site.
| HawkRider chapter 125 . 4/28/2013
I certainly did enjoy it. Ah, so he was in Twilight Town... That was unexpected...
Still, this was a very good story. I know I'm going to miss it.
Anyway, you did a great job here. Looks like you're already decreasing your workload. Good to see.
Well, good luck!
| HawkRider chapter 124 . 4/28/2013
Well, this was good. Looks like there is just the epilogue left.
You know, i think the lack of apparent purpose behind the attempted assassination was the only flaw in this story... But other people may disagree. I don't know.
Well, I'm looking forwards to reading the last chapter. It's such a shame to see this story end.
| HawkRider chapter 123 . 4/28/2013
I now feel so sorry for the Swords. That must be a tough job.
Well, it's Game time again. I wonder how this might turn out...
God luck to Riku!
| HawkRider chapter 122 . 4/28/2013
That was interesting... The Swords must really be the gossip cards, they get to hear all of this.
Anyway, this was an interesting chapter. I'm looking forwards to reading more.
| Anonymous chapter 125 . 4/26/2013
Nice ending. About time they get out. Just wish you didn't fall into the "Riku has to be gay, always!" pitfall like everyone else does. Really disappointing and depressing.
| CirciFox81314 chapter 125 . 4/25/2013
This story was epic. At first, I thought it would take forever for me to read it, but I was able to read and catch up and I awaited for new chapters! I really enjoyed it and it was amazing. The story line was awesome, the stuff in it was awesome and...yeah, it was really freaking awesome! Thank you for writing this story.
| Reviewer anons chapter 120 . 4/19/2013
I feel like I know what Ten is; I won't say my suspicions in case I'm correct.
| HawkRider chapter 121 . 4/19/2013
'Hiding without realising' is another way of saying 'getting post's and now I really want to use that line...
Anyway, this was another great chapter that I wholly enjoyed. I'm looking forwards to more (and finding out how the game, and this trip to the Staves, will go).
| HawkRider chapter 120 . 4/17/2013
Aha. So, ten is like Leo... That is an interesting idea all right... Very interesting...
I did enjoy that chapter. I had a feeling that it would be something like that for Ten. Maybe the same thing happened to him as happened to Leo...
I'm certainly curious. I can't wait to see how this next week will go!
| HawkRider chapter 119 . 4/16/2013
I wonder what Ten's problem with Leo is? I mean, I doubt he knows that RIku is Leo, so it must be him. Either that or it's because Riku was faster than him.
Well, another interesting chapter. I can't wait to see how the next part of the harvest will go.
| HawkRider chapter 118 . 4/16/2013
Well, this is interesting... I hadn't expected this to happen though. It is a good little twist.
This was a really good chapter. I really need to keep on top of reading them though...
| zaviour chapter 117 . 4/12/2013