Reviews for Thorny Roses
Guest chapter 29 . 12/3/2014
this was such a lovely story
slightlyxjaded chapter 29 . 11/24/2014
Awwww I really liked this story and the happy ending it provided! Usagi was very strong is this story! Mamoru was very weak-willed...interesting take on him. I loved how much effort you put into the characters! Jadeite cracked me up. My only constructive criticism is that throughout the story I was wondering why the generals did not start to become closer to Mamoru. I get why they deferred to Sailor Moon at first, but I thought they were mostly loyal to Prince Endymion since they were his generals and friends in the past. Anyways, that was just something that got me thinking. All in all, this was a fantastic story...thanks for writing it!
MagicGoddess2001 chapter 4 . 11/12/2014
luv it!
animegirl73 chapter 29 . 10/27/2014
Very enjoyable story.
tanithlipsky chapter 29 . 10/22/2014
EvaNguyen chapter 29 . 9/5/2014
Good fic! Very commendable how you made Chibiusa actually an inoffensive character :)
that1reviewer chapter 1 . 7/30/2014
I didnt really like usagi in this, it was so out of character, yeah i get the slap, but for her its seems SO out of character it really bugged me, sorry
msuarez95 chapter 29 . 7/29/2014
aaaaah, i loved this! 3
crimsontears82684 chapter 6 . 7/7/2014
This fic is all over the place. The characters are written so over the top that they really aren't even believable. For Usagi being so mature and Mary Sue, she sure as hell cant make up her mind like an informed adult. And she is a Mary Sue at this point. Perfect characters are boring. They have no depth but are perfect for fanfics becuase they can now do anything without pause. I'm sure your plot could have been really interesting but if our main character is perfect then it's just uninspired. I tried to read further but Mary Sues/Gary Stus are something that ruins a story for me. Keep writing and it will only get better.
bluebutterfly2006 chapter 2 . 4/27/2014
alice chapter 29 . 1/10/2014
Great story! I loved all of it!
Nalahime chapter 29 . 1/4/2014
Ive finally got through the whole story and I really like it! Especially because the Generals are there and paired with the Senshis, as it should be in my opinion! I love it all, just one thing caught my attention. For my taste it was a bit fast when Diamond came back to his senses. Emerald only pleaded with him and whoosh he changed back to normal in the blink of an eye. Rather peculiar, that was. It was a tad odd, but else I really loved the story. You could of course still improve in your writing, because I noticed that you often have "he" and "she" too many times right behind each other as the beginning of a sentence, just like names. But thats a minor setback and can be fixed easily if paid attention to. Sometimes you could also go in more detail about their emotions. I noticed that you do that so often, so well and really good and at other times it seemed to miss, like you didnt know how to describe it or that you wanted to hurry on with the story.

Anyways! All in all I REALLY liked it! Favo! :D
Alice chapter 19 . 1/3/2014
Pretty Hot!
Alice chapter 10 . 1/2/2014
Finding the condom was genius. great story, keep it up!
Alice chapter 7 . 1/2/2014
Yea, Darien is finally jealous...
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