Reviews for The Night Before the Promised Day
Remedy's Melody 109 chapter 1 . 10/25/2015
Wow...just wow
Ladyjai87 chapter 1 . 6/16/2015
Nice and sexy! I loved every word!
SamuraiYuvia chapter 1 . 2/15/2015
Ahhh I love it ! Please do more XD there's not enough of these kind of fics
XD good job
Guest chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
The greatest GreedLingxLanFan EVAH.
NURSE J0Y chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
Absolutely loved this! :D
AKimiB chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Holy hell, I'm glad I got curious! This was utterly fantastic!
Riz-Mayonnaise chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
a... we...some... ! but why did she call him by his name ? he is not ling for her, he's only her young lord
K chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Slightly over the top in the smut department as they went OOC.
Otherwise nice idea, coz who doesn't love Greed?
Guest chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
AWSOME!I love this couple and the whole thing is just AWSOME!
Spooky Cheesecake chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
Ohmigoshohmigoshohmigosh this was AMAZING. I cant exactly count how many times Ive read this... which is strange because I dont normally read something like this. But Greed was so very in-character and naturally, Lan Fan jumped quite out of character in the midst of all of it. And that switch between Greed and Ling then back to Greed... you really caught me off guard there XD
Dannie-29 chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
I have never recalled being so hot and bothered by a one-shot in my LIFE! Keep. It. UP!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
This was great except one little (yet very important) thing: Make a new paragraph every time someone else starts speaking. It's just a little formatting thing! (I know I know, I shouldn't bother to correct smut. But hey, might as well while I'm here...)
lye tea chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
That was incredibly hot! I loved Greed. He was so *very* in-character.
Taayluur chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
That was well-written. In character. I really wasn't expecting

the transition between Greed and Ling. Ya caught me off guard there~
XxQueenAeroxX chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
OMI GLOB THIS IS EXACTLY THE STORY IVE BEEN WAITING FOR!
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