|Reviews for The Mess You Left|
| HeatherSS1 chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
Don't know what to say about this that hasn't already been said. SO MANY KINDS OF HOT! Just... daaaaamn! The nails, the slapping, the struggle was just so unbelievably hot while at the same time keeping enough in-character that it was totally believable. Loved the semi-unexpectedness of Santana's reaction to being slapped... Wow.
| fabgay chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
God this story is so sexy it DESTROYS me. When Rachel slaps Santana and Santana realizes she likes it ADSKLFJEALKJSDFEK. And then Rachel, pushed facedown, getting fucked and BEGGING, I'M DEAD. And just when I thought it couldn't get hotter, Rachel tokes like a fucking pro and omg I don't even know. As a PWP writer, you are fucking dangerous. Like Santana, you could do/write anything and it's just... it's ALL sexy good times. Never thought I'd like a fic where Santana and Rachel have a struggle and the latter gets topped semi-violently, but this is actually like the hottest thing ever. Even when Santana pushed into Rachel's ass, a part of me was like, "omg no, I don't like reading about that," but the rest of me was echoing Rachel's "oh god yes." Dammit. COLD SHOWER. In summary, you should write more Pezberry. This is magic.
| Cone chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
I had to stop reading when Santana flipped her over and pulled her hair...I had to literally stand up in my room and clean it, to just take a moment to breathe and calm myself. That was just *fan myself*
| riverkirby chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
in my opinion Quinn is upset Santana took rachels virginity cause she wanted that :P
These two have an interesting relationship and makes you wonder where is it heading..
I love Rachel scared Santanas mom lol
| who'sthatgirl chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
I though that was hot going to spend my weekend reading all of you fic!
| lestobiosis chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
Awesome and hot
| mick3y92 chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
this was intensely hot and i never wat you to stop writing this pezberry encounters rachel trying to top santana and it not wrking out the first time was ugh cant explain this was just sexy loved it
| MelovePezberry chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
I see the my shorter cousin has told you about the fact I also use the name kutee on LJ but she took that name here so here I am MelovePezberry. I take the time to reread all of you stories this weekend so lets have so fun. I love the fact the Rachel took a hit from San's joint.
| We're A Two Shot chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
Totally didn't expect Rach to slap her but at the same time I kind of did because she learned from the best haha. I love these two
| B-rockaFaN chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
| blueashke chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
I love when people get slapping into the mix. LOVE IT
| Lcrazemag chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
HOW DOES THIS ONLY HAVE ONE REVIEW?
| Abnab chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
there is so much energy with these two it's fantastic! great job!