Reviews for New Friends
Sage McGavin chapter 4 . 3/20/2014
do you perhaps need a beta reader?
this is a good idea/plot but it's kinda hard to read
Chibi Kylee chapter 6 . 10/24/2013
Nice cliff hanger plz make more though
Lucyole chapter 6 . 3/11/2013
please find a beta or use sothing to helpwith spelling it is really
bad you sentences are sounding like you are from elemantary school
im sorry for ofedning you or making you sad for saying that your
story is really interesting and good and i would be happy to read more
of it as soon as possible.
*gives you lots of cookies to make up for the bad words*
Lucyole chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
your story is very interesting but you need a beta your spelling
and grammar are really bad sorry for saying that beacuase of that it
makes it a little bit harde to read your story properly but oyur
idea ist really good and exciting
Hikari Nova chapter 6 . 3/7/2013
such bad grammar it hurts X_X
RavenBloom chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
Hey,can I borrow a bit of your story?I want to make a crossover with part of it.
Ai Aino chapter 6 . 6/19/2012
i like your story keep updating :)
James Birdsong chapter 6 . 6/19/2012
Awesome six chapters.
SailorMoonAddict chapter 6 . 6/19/2012
yea the grammer here is confusing .-. anyway cant wait to see what happens next. But the inners apologizing seem way to early and sailor melody forgiving them is too easy too.
supersexyghotmew95 chapter 6 . 6/19/2012
Colleen Lylac chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
I think your plot is interesting. But, I think you need some improvement on the grammar. And about Dela could she actually you? Well, anyway keep writing and have fun
nickybluejess chapter 5 . 2/11/2012
Now that was a shock towards everyone. Cute chapter.
drey1321 chapter 4 . 1/5/2012
nggg...gimana,ya..ngomongnya? Mungkin ini bisa dibilang flame,sih :'(


Sejujurnya, gue pernah mengalami kayak gini. Bikin fanfict Naruto yang crossover dengan superhero2 yang gue buat sendiri. Alurnya pun gue sesuain dengan alur season 1nya Naruto. Terus, gue kasih liat ceritanya ke kakak kelas gue yang cinta mati dengan Uchiha Itachi. Walhasil marah-marah,lha dia karena gue ngebajak karya orang (katanya).

Jadi, ngg...gue galau mau komen apa di sini walaupun di sisi lain gue suka
Madame Magic chapter 4 . 12/24/2011
continue please this is really good
nickybluejess chapter 4 . 12/24/2011
Now you got me interested, what is going to happen? Rini is in danger right? DId you make Rei be possed by Evil, or a demon, or something like it. Maybe have Serena get killed and have her brought back by the people who love her. That would be awesome, so she could see who really appreciates her.

This story is getting really good. _
21 | Page 1 2 Next »