|Reviews for New Friends|
| Chibi Kylee chapter 6 . 10/24/2013
Nice cliff hanger plz make more though
| Lucyole chapter 6 . 3/11/2013
please find a beta or use sothing to helpwith spelling it is really
bad you sentences are sounding like you are from elemantary school
im sorry for ofedning you or making you sad for saying that your
story is really interesting and good and i would be happy to read more
of it as soon as possible.
*gives you lots of cookies to make up for the bad words*
| Lucyole chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
your story is very interesting but you need a beta your spelling
and grammar are really bad sorry for saying that beacuase of that it
makes it a little bit harde to read your story properly but oyur
idea ist really good and exciting
| Hikari Nova chapter 6 . 3/7/2013
such bad grammar it hurts X_X
| RavenBloom chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
Hey,can I borrow a bit of your story?I want to make a crossover with part of it.
| Ai Aino chapter 6 . 6/19/2012
i like your story keep updating :)
| James Birdsong chapter 6 . 6/19/2012
Awesome six chapters.
| SailorMoonAddict chapter 6 . 6/19/2012
yea the grammer here is confusing .-. anyway cant wait to see what happens next. But the inners apologizing seem way to early and sailor melody forgiving them is too easy too.
| supersexyghotmew95 chapter 6 . 6/19/2012
OOOOOO THEY BETTER SOON OR SO HELP ME I'LL DESTROY EM love mew
| Colleen Lylac chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
I think your plot is interesting. But, I think you need some improvement on the grammar. And about Dela could she actually you? Well, anyway keep writing and have fun
| nickybluejess chapter 5 . 2/11/2012
Now that was a shock towards everyone. Cute chapter.
| drey1321 chapter 4 . 1/5/2012
nggg...gimana,ya..ngomongnya? Mungkin ini bisa dibilang flame,sih :'(
Sejujurnya, gue pernah mengalami kayak gini. Bikin fanfict Naruto yang crossover dengan superhero2 yang gue buat sendiri. Alurnya pun gue sesuain dengan alur season 1nya Naruto. Terus, gue kasih liat ceritanya ke kakak kelas gue yang cinta mati dengan Uchiha Itachi. Walhasil marah-marah,lha dia karena gue ngebajak karya orang (katanya).
Jadi, ngg...gue galau mau komen apa di sini walaupun di sisi lain gue suka
| Madame Magic chapter 4 . 12/24/2011
continue please this is really good
| nickybluejess chapter 4 . 12/24/2011
Now you got me interested, what is going to happen? Rini is in danger right? DId you make Rei be possed by Evil, or a demon, or something like it. Maybe have Serena get killed and have her brought back by the people who love her. That would be awesome, so she could see who really appreciates her.
This story is getting really good. _
| KateHitomiLovett chapter 3 . 11/16/2011
Is it alright if you have Serena beat up Raye with a chair in front of everyone like Rika did to Satoko from Higurashi no naku koro ni? (Youtube, Rika vs Satoko ;3) And in one of the chapters risk her life to save Dela/Melody and die but be brought back to life by the ones who love her? p.s. Amy should leave the sailor scouts and follow Serena like a puppy (Awww So CUTE! x#3)