Reviews for Thirteen Coins
babesrus2 chapter 19 . 7/4
I can't even count how many times I've returned to read and re-read this story. Kudos to both of you for a beautiful story. Hope to see you co-write another.
StubbornPansy chapter 19 . 6/10
This is a very touching ending and they both are TOTALLY happy and still have the newness to enjoy their blending.

Excellent writing
StubbornPansy chapter 17 . 6/10
who could ever regret being loved by Ranger with all his moves?
StubbornPansy chapter 16 . 6/10
As usual excellent writing and give us insight into the preparations!
StubbornPansy chapter 15 . 6/10
The Merry Men are experts at creative usage of items for them needs.

Excellent writing
StubbornPansy chapter 14 . 6/10
Talk about spur of the moment decisions.

There is no Morelli to go back to, but has he really thought this through?
StubbornPansy chapter 13 . 6/10
Ranger's version of "secrets" are constantly causing Stephanie emotional harm. Why can't Ranger see that?

It is hard to trust a man who doesn't trust you but demands total compliance.
StubbornPansy chapter 12 . 6/10
I am amazed when people can write about places they have never been

Your visions are excellent.
StubbornPansy chapter 11 . 6/10
Stephanie is learning a lot from Ranger and his men. She is building her self confidence in her abilities.

Excellent writing.
StubbornPansy chapter 10 . 6/10
When you can't trust Ranger to be in "control" of things you have a dangerous situation!

Great writing!
StubbornPansy chapter 9 . 6/10
Excellent emotional reflections and finding the root cause of Ranger's reluctance to commit to Stephanie.

Thank you.
StubbornPansy chapter 8 . 6/10
Hmm...thank god the Merry Men are loyal to Ranger or they just might try to steal her away from him.

Great emotional writing.
StubbornPansy chapter 7 . 6/10
This love triangle must be hard to write since most of us only love one man at a time.

I like the way you handled it and Ranger's reactions to it.
StubbornPansy chapter 6 . 6/10
It is strange to see Ranger so vulnerable and fearful.

Excellent writing
StubbornPansy chapter 5 . 6/10
It is surprising how an author can write such detailed things unless they have some knowledge of how the services train their people.

this is very nice writing.

They are safe for now.
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