Reviews for Auggie's Annie
momof2 chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
So, reading more of your work. I love this poem. You can see how he feels every time he is near her. You described it perfectly.
bookish327 chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
Normally, I'm not a fan of poetry (either as a form of fan-fiction or just regular poetry), but I enjoyed this poem. Your words flow well, and good characterization. :-)
Gwynne G chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
OMG I really like this poem so much. Your third stanza "Every morning, my darkness is shattered," just melts me into a gooey mess.

I think you have a wonderful vision of Auggie. He must feel this way at times, and your language has the brightness and the darkness that it needs to create the mood.

I would love to see more of your work.
jade-angel5 chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
That was really well done, beautiful view of how Auggie perceives Annie. Might I suggest you do another on how Annie views Auggie...
Patricia Louise chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Neat. I really like it.