|Reviews for Too Hot to Sleep|
| Bob chapter 1 . 2h
Very cute, nice and simple. Thank you for sharing! :)
| Mischief Tea chapter 1 . 7/22
"...it was a ridiculous thing to say" I don't know why but that bit of narrative made me really happy. It was just such a natural bit of dialogue followed by such a natural reaction. That bit of feeling silly for saying something true, but it's still true.
Oh look more adorable-ness. And now to the next one! ONWARD! :D
| kiera chapter 1 . 4/24
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/20/2015
Awe! That was so utterly cute it's not funny.
| Tairulz chapter 1 . 9/10/2013
Wow, that was sweet... i liked it :D
| Strata's Stargazer chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
| ada69 chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Aww that was cute! Very nice. :D
| Animelover Ari chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
AAWW! CUTE STORY. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. BTW. NICE FANFICTION. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! AGAIN BTW, NOT YELLING AT YOU BECAUSE IM MAD. HONEST! IM JUST REALY REALY REALY HYPER! YAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!
| Flowers4urThoughts chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
This story is so cute! I love it! You are really good at writing. Please keep writing more stories!
| EllieStone chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
This is so sweet! It captures Ed and Winry's relationship perfectly. I love their bickering :)
Favorite bit: "But I want to give you everything."
| Lizzie The Mongoose chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
| linkluver3 chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
AAAAAAH IT TOOK ME FOREVER TO LOGIN RAWR.
GOOD. STORY. Really awesome story! I love how Edward is like, totally doting on Winry but not at the same time. Perfect portrayal of what their relationship would be in that situation. My favourite part was when Edward was deciding what to say, and he gave reasons why he wouldn't say each phrase. XD Ridiculously skillful! :D
Keep writing! I look forward to more of your work!
| TheMistOfThePast chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
lol "It'll do..."
This was so cute!
| Weirdo-Lover chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
XD ahhhh super cute :) Good job.
When you mentioned Al and Mei, I had a flashback to when Winry jumped out of Al's armor in the North and Mei was all like "Who's this other woman!"
Al: "Its not like that" And then he mentally yells at himself, 'Why am I explaining this as if I were cheating on her or something?'
| Gisel0202 chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
THIS WAS SO AWESOME! So cute :3 i really liked this story.