Reviews for like lightning (charging through the angry sky)
Windschild8178 chapter 3 . 7/2/2013
Holy shit. I had to read this three or four times then read it out loud to fully appreciate all the elements. It's fantastic. Very inspirational. On a side note. It's fun to read out loud with a Boston accent.
BoutsofInsanity42 chapter 2 . 11/4/2012
Awesome, this needs to be a fic.
What's Your Point chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
I really like the insight and explanations you give in this one-shot. Honestly, it makes me want to read a fic where Naruto has this mindset. I also simultaneously liked and disliked everything parenthesis; on one hand, it explained things so it was made more clear, but it also broke from his train of thought to give you background information. It'd be cool if you could combine the two somehow. But your grammar was really good and I like your writing style! :D
Carmielle chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
I love it. A lot. And i'm not joking.

You need to change 'when Iruka scolds him' because the rest of that phrase is past tense.