|Reviews for Single|
| No-Rhyme-Just-Reason chapter 1 . 3/6/2016
Ok, well I guess I'm confused, because I thought John was in the military overseas during WWI, when John-Boy and Jason were born. But here he is working in a sandwich shop...somewhere stateside? Or is he in Paris or somewhere in Europe, doing a part-time job while on furlough? A lot of the names sounded foreign, so... *shrugs*.
Also I'm not sure that vegetarianism was that well-known or popular back in those days. It seems a bit of an anachronism to attempt to recreate Olivia after a modern RL persona. Given that the canon Olivia is a country girl whose diet consists of typical rural home-grown farm fare such as chicken, sausage, bacon, ham, milk, eggs, butter (I realize the last three are allowable in moderation), in addition to breads, fruits and vegetables, your Olivia seems to bear faint resemblance to the original.
My apologies; but I just wasn't sure what you were trying to communicate here.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
You have to write more it is killing me!
| WaltonsFan300 chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
really liked it! please keep updating, I thought it as a great idea for a story, and I love how shy they were when they met!
| WaltonLover chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
I love it please write more!
| thefierydeath chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
| Cruelest Sea chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
I like it! More?:)