Omg! How could I miss this intense, original, intriguing story until now?
How refreshing to be presented an Edward who has to be explored, discovered and appreciated before being struck with emotions and attraction through feelings and appreciation for his witty banter and intelligent comebacks...cumbacks ..lol...
I didn't know this story wasn't finished all the way when I started reading, but I loved it too much to stop halfway and I devoured every available word, sacrificed sleep over the pull to continue and being with them. I will have to search for possible published books by you, right after I read everything else I have saved to my kindle for years now. I just knew I should keep some gems for later, anticipating a great read!
Thank you for sharing your brilliant brain with with us
xox

I miss your words.

I hope they're not going to be pulled apart?

I'm guessing you have abandoned this, seeing as it has been a while, but this is a very well written story, with brilliant characters and a great plot, I hope you find the inspiration, and time to finish it x

I want to read about the marathon

Read until "the end". It was nice. Good writing. (And I liked the Urban Dictionary slang. It was fitting for Bella's point of view. Even though the constant reference of PSAT words were annoying. Just use the words.) I disagree with your summary. I wouldn't classify them as "highly intelligent people". Edward maybe. But not "highly". Just average. Maybe a bit above. Could have been the upbringing as well. But Bella didn't seem very intelligent at all. A little below average maybe. She wasn't very rational (a clear sign of remarkably high intelligence) nor was she a quick thinker. Quite the opposite. But because she stayed true to character it didn't bother me.

This is so ironic. Bella accusing Edward of being all the things that she is. I mean, she became what her father was. Just to prove, that not only men are like this. Secretly she's just lonely and afraid. It bugs her that she cares so much that her father didn't want her. Understandable. Who wouldn't be hurt by that and who wouldn't care? (A friend of mine has the same issue and sees the issue but denies it in front of everyone.) Such weak characters. At least Bella is weak AF. I don't like her and I certainly wouldn't fuck her. I don't do the crazies. (Which is good. She probably wouldn't fuck me either. As I don't have a dick.) This is just a rant about the *characters* not your story or writing. Good job. These characters seem quite realistic given the circumstances.

I just found this story. It's a long shot, but I hope it's not abandoned, because it's so good.

It's been a while hope you plan on finishing?

I like the set-up of this one. It is very interesting and well-written. Sorry it is unfinished, it seemed to be very good. RL can get the best of us sometimes. Well, thanks...hope all is well.

Is this the end?

Omg I love your story are you going to finish it

Is this going to be complete? Or was that the end? I am really enjoying it and would like to see the resolution of the different story lines.

It's been three years, so I'm guessing you've abandoned this but I just wanted to let you know that I absolutely love your stories.

I know the odds of you updating are pretty slim, but I really hope you find the time/inspiration to finish this! I love your characterization and dialogue. thanks for this!