Reviews for Here IT Comes One Shot
dancergirl3 chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
sooooooooo cute
KathPetrova.Diary chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
Oh so cute ! :D
smashrowukepal chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
aww adorable Hunter's hilarious
rini anointed436 chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
Hunter really cracks me up here. It's cute. The family scene at the end makes a great Kodak moment. It's endearing to see Hunter and Tori bonding with their baby.

The common error that I see is you mixing up "he" with "she" and "his" with "her" sometimes and vice versa. "He" and "his" are used for guys. "She" and "her" are used for girls.
dancing-leila97 chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
its very cool but why hayden it sounds like jayden jaja lol
YellowPrincess chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Aw! I loved it!

That was a cute story and Hunter made me laugh, he's so adorable :p

Great Job!