|Reviews for Look Underneath|
| Tiger Priestess chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
I love the angst and I hope that Sasuke and Sakura will be able to forgive/accept each other again. Especially until they get married and have a lot of Uchiha babies!
I don't mind Karin showing up as long as Sasuke doesn't like her.
Great start on your story!
| Silent-Gamine chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
This story sounds really interesting. I'm suprised it's your first multi chapter fic :) it's very likely that if Sasuke did come back to Konoha, it would be pretty awkward between him and Sakura and their relationship would be really strained. A lot of fics don't really go into detail about sasuke's feeling on the whole issue so it's pretty great to see it from a new perspective. And I love It when naruto meddles XD (because we know if he didn't it would take them centuries to actually talk to each other). Can't wait to hear more from this story :)
| too addicted to fiction chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
SQUEEEE I'm so excited! So I really enjoyed this first chapter; poor Sasuke and Sakura :( I really enjoyed how you drew parallels between them, like how they're both afraid to see each other and how their heart hurts a little for Naruto and his harbored hopes and how every day just seems to be blurring into the next... Man, angsty, neh? But every good romance needs a little bit of angst, in my opinion. I'm glad Tsunade is there to push Sakura a little bit in the right direction, also. From the summary I gather that they two will be forced together (aghhh with Karin) so that'll be exciting. Also, the line about how Sasuke's reason was sleeping so and so many streets away was lovely. Great start, and I'm psyched to see what happens next. Thanks for the great read!
| The 8th Stone chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
This is just... Capturing consistency. :) I love the mood. This story shows great, great promise.
And it shall go in my favorites. A great honor, my friend, truly a great honor. :D
| Cherryjubilee chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Wow, can't wait to see the next chapter. Really good...
| Fan chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
| the general girl chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Carol! I remember seeing this on your nano and thinking "ahhh I almost can't wait until November ends so I can read this", so I'm really, really, reeeeeaally glad that you're gonna post as you go.
I love where you're going with the first chapter; most of the time fics that take place post-war or post-THAT CHAPTER doesn't really deal with the repercussions of what was basically Sakura's premeditated decision to sever all bonds. Permanently. I can DEFINITELY see her being preoccupied about it when peace settles.
And Sasuke! Your Sasuke was perfect. You've managed to put Sakura in his head without making him corny or just UNSASUKE-like. The shower scene really gets to me-how his guilt just kind of subconsciously manifests itself when he scrubs too hard, etc.
I didn't only love the angsty bits though! I lovelovelove the Naruto/Sakura scene in the middle, their friendship always makes me smile SO WIDE and you've captured them perfectly here, with goofy Naruto (without making him into an idiot-he may be goofy but he's not STUPID, he still sees things) and a more light-hearted Sakura.
Just overall a GREAT, great job and I'm literally just bouncing on my toes to see where you go with the fic (and the entrance of Karin!).
| Unorchestrated chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
I'm excited to see where your story goes! You convey their emotions very well, and it's as if i feel them too. I'm really looking forward to this story! Thank you for the hard work! :D
| Unicorn Paige chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Hold on for one second. *sets head on fire* !
Okay, review time! (This is so exciting, I'm going to be chair dancing all night!) I still giggle with child-like glee every time I read the first scene. I really like having Ino there and teasing Sakura about getting a husband. AND THE THOUGHT OF A SQUISHY! You know I can't resist any thoughts of the squishy.
The next scene, with Sasuke traveling back to Konoha broke my heart! The idea of him not only having no one to really go back to was bad enough, but the realization that there was no one who cared. WAHHHH! I'm so glad Naruto gives him that hug in the next scene!
Now, the scene with Sasuke taking a shower (besides making me drool for reasons I don't need to explain, right? He-he!) floors me. I love how much you're saying here without really saying it. His blood washing down into the pipes beneath Leaf and for him to look at physical wounds he's inflicted on himself and think he's unworthy of Sakura, just so, SO great.
The next scene with Sakura and Naruto makes me giggle! I know I've told you this before, but I love what you've done with the contest Naruto has between all three of them. And to see Naruto bouncing between Sasuke and Sakura and relaying information about them to one another...sigh, it's all just so tragic. TEAM SEVEN NEEDS TO HAVE A GROUP HUG!
I can't even comment on the next scene. My brain just goes fzzt! He-he, "But Sasuke had a very good reason for staying in the Leaf. Six blocks over, behind the water tower, three windows from the left, his reason was sleeping peacefully." I could read this over and over and over and over again and every time, FZZT! OH! And in that same scene, where Sasuke can't tell one mission from the next? I love it. I think, as far as Sasuke returning to Konoha goes, there will be this period where everything is just a blur and I really, really like seeing that here.
Ahh, and the ending. SASUKE. SAKURA. WHY MUST YOU TWO BE RIDDLED WITH SO MUCH ANGST! DO I NEED TO GET SEBASTIAN UP HERE TO SING KISS THE GIRL FOR YOU?
He-he, anyway. I'm so, SO excited that you're finally posting this! You've done a beautiful job and you should be very, very proud of yourself!
| Tukiko K chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
This is beautiful. It makes my heart clench. Question...how many years had it been since the war? Any way, great job!