Reviews for Our Own Sunset
Guest chapter 1 . 4/8/2016
Cuuuuute
nick chapter 1 . 4/2/2015
Here are my questions. 1. When did the fanfic take place? Be specific. 2. How old was everyone that's in the fanfic? 3. What Pokémon did the group own? 4. How did they get those Pokémon? 5. How long had they own them for? 6. Any idea on where in the Sinnoh Region the gang was at? Be sure to clear this up for me.

nick
mark chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
Will there be a second chapter? :) this is really good one I like how even though Misty is down Ash knows what to say...even though he is dense most of the time he can be pretty smart
Pokegirl666 chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
Cool!
LiquidNitrous chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
I see, this is part of 'AAML: Diamond and Pearl Version'. A great one shot, kinda makes me miss my girlfriend... Anyways, when are you gonna update the 'AAML: Diamond and Pearl Version' anyways? I LOVE THAT STORY. Keep it up Echidna, and btw, I see REAL Echidnas a lot. U jelly? Lol I look forward to more fics from you
FlippyFan chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
It was very nice! Just make it a little more descriptive.
ButterBacon123 chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
cute! :)
G-Matt chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
Very nice, beautiful and cute one-shot! Thumbs up!
Antiyonder chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
Well considering that this is set in the continuum of your main Pokefic, it's just as good as getting a new chapter, and could even count as a bonus chapter.

1. Definitely snickered at Brock thinking about the CoTD named Autumn.

2. Even with some of the maturity that Ash goes through, he still manages to be surprising in the romance department. Well done.

3. Though I apologize for my ignorance, but I don't think I've heard of the term Golden Tongue.

That said, any plans to do more one shots like this one?
memmek10k chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
great one shot
thedarkpokemaster chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
Sweet but why is it pokeshipping day?
Genny35 chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
Awwww! What a cute story!

So sweet and awesome!

Amazing!
SulliMike23 chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
That was a great oneshot and a great fluff between Ash and Misty. Makes me wonder if you'll make a Christmas oneshot.
Sparxx chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
Aww this was adorable! I love the Autumn! It is a really pretty time of year. Great job on the story! It was really good :)

Hurray for Pokeshipping day! And I can't wait for the new chapter to come out! xD Good job again!
aamlfan18 chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
Nice one shot. N Happy Pokeshipping Day
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