Reviews for Brotherhood: The Recruits
Firefly070995 chapter 7 . 7/1/2014
Still good :)
I've forgotten how many people Ezio brought into the brotherhood, but it seems so many :\ I'm a bit worried that I'll start to forget the names of your characters if there are many more.
Other than that still good, though I admit the girl in this chapter really annoyed me, I can't stand spoiled brats, though I guess she redeemed herself in the end
Firefly070995 chapter 4 . 7/1/2014
Already very impressed by this story, especially for one that has so few reviews. So far your characters are quite interesting and I can't wait to see how they interact with each other and Ezio.
I'm going to try and review as often as possible, because I honestly believe this story deserves more recognition that it has received.
The only thing I can recommend to improve would be to read through it carefully before you post it, as sometimes you miss words or the sentences don't quite make sense. Getting a beta would also help in this regard.
Aus chapter 21 . 6/26/2014
Wow. Um. Brutal. Well written. Very sad. Graphic without going over the top. I do hope the misery ends soon for her. How does someone recover from that sufficiently in order to function?
Waiting chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
Still checking regularly for that elusive update...
S.P chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
Still checking... Still hoping...
Aus chapter 19 . 4/3/2014
Please update again soon!
Someone chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
This has got to be one of the most underservingly under-reviewed fics of all time. Please dont let that hold you back. Its awesome
Guest chapter 16 . 10/28/2013
Can't wait for the next chapter! I've been checking everyday since I found this story
S.P chapter 14 . 7/2/2013
What a fantastic writer you are! I was so desperate to find a half decent Ezio fic I decided to branch out and read one centred on his recruits. And i'm so glad I did! Finally charcters with depth and complexity. You've varied them and their stories wonderfully- someone for anyone to relate to. I confess i started reading only caring about finding the parts with Ezio but by the end of the first chapter i was captivated. I can't figure put which i like best. I like the way you've set tge story out and started with the recruits stories rather than revisiting it once they've become a recruit. And i thinkits very clever the way you've woven the events of AC2 and ACB into significant events of the recruits lives. You've managed to somehow find the perfect balance. I really hope you are able to update soon and your muses cooperate. I'll be checking every day.
outlaw chapter 5 . 11/24/2012
genuis, intellegent reading material!
outlaw chapter 4 . 11/24/2012
and...onto the next, this is some good stuff!
outlaw chapter 3 . 11/24/2012
dude more!
outlaw chapter 2 . 11/24/2012
awesomness! lets keep on reading!
outlaw chapter 1 . 11/19/2012
wow a great read!
Zero612 chapter 11 . 10/17/2012

Delta: That was dark.

Yup. Excellently written and well paced but dark.

Delta: Ottavio was creepy as fuck.

Yes he was.
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