Reviews for Number 31
BooksDon'tJustTellStories chapter 1 . 2/5/2015
Haha I read Number 31 as 'Marry Her'...but I think I might be getting a bit ahead of myself. Great story, loved the way you show 'serious Tony'- some people lack that in Fanfiction :) I look forward to reading the rest of your stories.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Am reading through your back catalogue on this site, and enjoying your work hugely. I just wish they had more moments like this fic in the show! I think it is so the type of thing Tony would do. Thank you.
Amilyn chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
Very excellent. The fears, concerns, repetition of "in a godforsaken desert"...and I love her trying to joke that she wants to one-up him...and him pleading "Don't" as he doesn't want what happened to him when he was captive to happen to her or for her to be EVER captured again. Nice work.
Phosphorescent chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
Yet another wonderful fic with a missed Tony/Ziva moment.
Alidiabin chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
Wonderful little ficlet. I like your bucket list better.
byebyebirdy chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
naww! beauty!
The Lady Grace chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
Very nice. I loved it all, and I have to say my favorite part was the mini-muffins. Great job!
Cowgrl94 chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
Aye I was dying for a scene like this one!
Khgirl08 chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
Aw :3
mon-petit-pois chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
Wow that was so cute. The writers BETTER put something like that in there.
Anonymous033 chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
What is number 10 on his list again? I forgot :O

I just hope you're happy that you made me cryyyyy. It was completely unexpected, haha. I was just happily reading and then suddenly, BAM. He says "don't", and there are tears all over the place.

But this is beautiful, and I love it. I'm a little too tired at present to think of a good #31 (the first thing that comes to mind seems to be 'visit Paris with Ziva again', but that's hardly creative), but I love this fic. Just so you know.

11nivea342 chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
Wonderful. Short but so powerful. Great work
Hannah chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
Possibly page 57 ;D
E.O aLL tHe WAY chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
i love your scenario... and i hope tony tells her to please come back to him and she says i will always come back to you... we can definitely hope for something like that but i don't think it will happen but you should make a sequel...
1Styx and Stones1 chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
Ooh... I don't know what you think happens next, but there's a lovely little scene playing out in my mind right now... )

Great work. Very cute. And now I'm seeing all sorts of opportunities in what I had considered a fairly Tiva-less episode. I'm nothing if not optimistic...

Oh my gosh! The list! I immediately had to look it up, of course, and I squealed when I saw number 26. TELL HER! Tell who? What? Eek! Now I've got myself all squealy...

Anyway, nice work. Thanks for sharing!
25 | Page 1 2 Next »