Reviews for Moonlight season 2
Guest chapter 11 . 1/12/2014
are you going to make any more chapters to the moonlight serice
Guest chapter 2 . 1/12/2014
U should have put something like when I went home i drank 2 glasses of b blood and I wanted to tell her what I was feeling about her new friend but I drank my blood in peace
Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
U should its really good
none chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
Sweet I love where the story is going
Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
A big point of the ending at this episode had been the fact that Beth wasn't ready and mick understanding this bit them being together anyway despite their human and vampire status'. So ur story makes no sense. She wouldn't just change her mind so super quickly on this issue. Hence why I have
McKenzieAnne chapter 11 . 6/10/2013
Hey I know you stopped writing this months a go, but I figured I should review it anyways. First off I love your storyline and how accurate it is and you've done a great job of writing the characters reactions as we would have seen them in the show. However there were a few things in your writing that took away from the story. You switch back and forth from present to past tense and from first to third person. You also rush what's happening and leave out descriptions that could boost the story and also it looks like you haven't spell checked, grammar checked or proof read it. There was mis-spelled words, words put of order and wrong words (ex. Forcing rather than focusing). Keep writing though practice makes perfect :)
Luna chapter 4 . 5/15/2013
Love it!
Luna chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
I love it! I wish you would have posted some more, it's perfectly written :)
Pity there aren't any Moonlight-roleplayer left; I tried to find some on
but been unsuccessful. To cut a long story short, that's by far one of the most accurate
fanfics I've read so far.
xxx
A Fan chapter 11 . 1/10/2013
I love this but I think that the chapters are rushed and a little short. You should try to describe thing more like instead of just fire they could be yellow flames litn up all around them burning their flesh I couldn't do it, it couldn't watch this. I hit my head in Micks strong hard chest and felt his hand making a soothing circlur pattern on my back. His vioce was so soothing saying "It will all be over soon." Then the darkness swallowed me whole, I had passed out.
B Wilhelm chapter 11 . 10/5/2012
Sad to see Simone go, but you reap what you sow, eh?
Good story- please watch the spelling. It can be an unnecessary distraction from the action.
B Wilhelm chapter 10 . 9/25/2012
Interesting twist on Simone. Who is the guy? A new character? A random vamp? Will Josef kill him? I'm liking this.
B Wilhelm chapter 9 . 9/21/2012
So typical of Josef!
Still have to see who made the list.
Keep on writing!
BW chapter 8 . 9/5/2012
Great story- it's just getting warmed up and I can't wait to see what happens with the infamous list!
Guest chapter 7 . 8/30/2012
thanks
Guest chapter 7 . 8/29/2012
Well done! Great story!
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