|Reviews for Another Side, Another MetaStory|
| Luna Lillyth chapter 42 . 8/13
Why do I think this Charlie is going to be a pain?
| AKAAkira chapter 42 . 2/24/2012
Whoa..."dunno about 100", you say, and then you went ahead really pulled a fast one there, by revealing Charlie and his nature. SIX people reviewed the last chapter alone - darn, I feel like the only one reading who hasn't.
So...my only question is whether Roxas really knew why Charlie brought him to that "caryard". (Roxas said he was truthfully answering Charlie's questions, and then went and asked those same "Tell me where we are and why you brought me here?", so...)
Still - neat trick, redistributing Roxas' keychains that way. As well as explaining away the destroyed computer.
As for "prefer[ing to] hearing things [Roxas'] way" - er, I'd think that's more because Roxas has a far bigger fan base than Liam. No offense Liam. Surprisingly, I did notice one thing in trying to compare the two stories...this one double-spaces after each paragraph, while the last one doesn't. Perhaps the whitespace is the reason why this story *looked* more inviting.
Nice conclusion, awesome story, and a very compelling leader and leeway giver to MetaCoded. (...Pardon the lame pun.)
| satheroth335 chapter 42 . 2/24/2012
i CANT wait for metacoded!
| Sora Matasuki chapter 42 . 2/23/2012
*room fills with automatic applause* Well Done! Well Done! I loved this story to death, this series is AWESOME! :D I CAN'T WAAAAAIT! (to be king! O_o My mind had filled that in. huh, Hello Simba, didn't know you'd be singing today!) Ahem. All joking aside, I really can't wait. I LOVE IT! :D Thank you Roxas, Thank you Liam, thank you StarLion! :D
| GoldenGriffiness chapter 42 . 2/23/2012
It's done... ;_;
Urg, what to say? I loved this to death,it's one of my favorite KH stories I've found, I've cracked up many a time...
I think I prefer Roxas to Liam... No offence, but he seamed a lot less sue-ish and more believable. Part of it is just how you've matured as a author.
I am waited with baited breath for the sequel!
| heartarrow56 chapter 42 . 2/23/2012
And so come the conclusion of Roxas's story! I have to say, I'm surprised that so much happened within that time frame. But then again, maybe I shouldn't considering that he's technically Liam's nobody. I can't wait for the story of what happened with Charlie and Liam! See you then! o
| Sora Matasuki chapter 41 . 2/22/2012
all I have to say is ...awe crud... That was the only thing running through my mind as Roxas narrates. So many things are starting to make sense!
1. Liam rushes off to parts unknown.
2. this freaky vison thingy.
You have just set yourself up for a sequel, DON'T LET US DOWN STARLION!All your fans are waiting with baited breath, I for one am really excited. Who is this Charlie and is he REALLY the brother of Neku? Hmmm...you have left us off with many questions!
| heartarrow56 chapter 41 . 2/22/2012
Wow, that was interesting. I wonder what those last visions were about and who this Charlie person is. I have a feeling this story (well at least this series for lack of a better word) is far from over. I cant wait to see what's next! Update soon! o
| Ghost Reader1996 chapter 41 . 2/21/2012
nice plot twist the Book has a brother. Can't wait for the next chapter
| BlackSpiderman 4 chapter 41 . 2/21/2012
Starlion you sneaky, sneaky, bastard.
Are you setting up a sequel to Metastory?
I love it and I can't wait to read it!
I'm sure it's obvious but Charlie is the brother of the book aka Neku am I right?
I think you should have gone with Joshua but excellent as always!
| GoldenGriffiness chapter 41 . 2/20/2012
I sense a sequel! Now I am very happy! Could this "Charlie"perhaps be Neku's brother? I can't wait to find out!
| satheroth335 chapter 41 . 2/20/2012
| AKAAkira chapter 40 . 2/20/2012
Oh, that is so not funny. Just because I went over midnight PST, this thing logged me off automatically even while submitting the review... -.-
Yeah, the review below is mine.
Though, at least you get an *extra* review now. Think you can still make 100 reviews before the final chapter here?
| Guest chapter 40 . 2/20/2012
Hm, I'm not sure I understand the reasoning you used for reabsorbing Xion's powers back...
But the actual fight itself was AWESOME. Jafar's staff was put into better use than the man himself was able to think of; the dark shards' final purpose was a complete twist; the Ruler of the Skies' entry was a very clever match into this pre-painted, yet ingeniously tailored, picture puzzle; and the act of taking Xion's Keyblade, too, was a very fitting and well-timed clincher. And heck, I can't even complain about the length this time.
I'm decidedly impressed by the action again. And in all, this is definitely the best chapter so far of the story.
I wonder what'll happen in the time gap between this day and the original day that Roxas was supposed to be defeated by Riku...
| heartarrow56 chapter 40 . 2/18/2012
It's finally over. But Roxas has to go early...too bad for him...Well, it seems like it's winding down to the last chapter or so. Can't wait to see what's next! Update soon! o