|Reviews for Birthday|
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
I can't seem to find the story that lead up to this. It angers me because this story is fabulous and I am an extreme Vaati and Vaatixoc fangirl. Maybe you could make a sequel to this, a chapter story. That would be fantastic.
The only complaint I have is that Vaati is a bit ooc. If you think about it, the real Vaati wouldn't 'apologize' like that, he would probably mutter or whisper it because of his big ego. There were a few other ooc problems, but thats my ONLY complaint.
Fabulous story, please continue with this couple.
Fangirls like me NEED it.
| Roseanna62 chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
"I dont care wheather he likes me or not, I want the cake, and I want it NOW!" *eats cake* "mmmmm...cake..."
| Fearofchicken13 chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
*starts eating the cake* wow this is good..What? no not the cake this one shot is amazing i really liked it. :)
| volleyowlets chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
I like this :) Write more for it? Please?
| YouGotBurned chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
I didn't force you to!
| Kikipalmer21 chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
PRETTY good one shot! Can you do a follow up on this?
| buddygirl1004 chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
Haha love u too Game. I'll talk to Ellie and Rin, they both say they are never gonna get married or have kids...sigh, my only nieces and nephews will come from Matthew...he is a flirt and a half that boy lol. This was really good!