Thanks for the update, your making a good job in turning the game in a novel, well done!

Loved your idea to writte the game story as a novel, you made the intro scene exactly as i remenberd it. Nice work.

Nice to see you're really picking this fic back up

I really, REALLY love you for this. I'm not even close to finishing and I dont think i can since i dont have the game anymore. But Xenoblade's story is very interesting, no to mention long, and im happy that you decided to take up the difficult task of writing it. Thank you

Although your sections are starting and finishing at logical points they are beginning to lack the scope and skill with which you begun the novelisation as well as there are no longer any of the sidequests, which you so diligently had been including in the first couple of chapters.

This is fantastic! Thank you so much for writing this! Please keep it up! _ You're doing such a great job turning it into a novel, and I'm really excited to read more! You're doing a fantastic job!

Today I started writing a fic like yours, but in Spanish. I'm sorry, I did not look the English stories before. If I had known it, I probably have written another history.

I wonder how interesting can be two versions of a Xenoblade Chronicles novel... I look for a novel with few personal elements, but respecting the story line.

Sorry for my bad English: I've never been good with your language, but I can understand it with some effort. At any rate, I think I'm understandable.

You did a great job.

very pretty so far! I love this game and you are writing the characters well.

This is good

Amazing piece right here. I've read the first five chapters and it is a huge wave of nostalgia. It reminds me of when I first played though xenoblade.
I love you take on incorporating cut scenes with battles and quests. The story seems to flow so naturally together.
Slowly, but surely, the story will come together in its own special Xenoblade way.
I look forward to see this novelization grow and how exactly you turn a game and its pieces into a smooth flowing story.

Hey Raik!

XD I wanted to write a novelisation as well but it seems someone else already has XD Whatever. Anyways, this is pretty well written! I couldn't find any grammar or spelling errors, which is good. You do have a good vocabulary, but you need to apply it a bit more. A bit more description would be nice as well as emotion description (that sounded a lot better in my head).

Nevertheless, this is very well written. You got the characters and dialogue down pat and it follows the main storyline perfectly. Keep it up! :D

Archsage

You updated. That took a while. Well if you can't find the game there's always this.

. . . very interesting

. . . very interesting

Let's see:

*There's at least one mispelling of "Mechon" - "Mehcon".

*The Monado wasn't broken; the machine it slashed was.

*Try to cut as much unnecessary details as possible; you don't want to make readers "slog through".

Otherwise, it seems fine.