Where's Melia?

I don't know what, but something tells me this person thinks that Melia is beautiful. Can't quite put my finger on it though. Great story, by the way.

We are starting to reach the good parts with this.
Good work, keep it up.

Um, I'm not sure if you noticed this, but right after "'Find him, for me too.'", it says "Gadolt replied firmly" instead of "Otharon replied firmly".

Other than that, great story so far, keep it up!

Great job with the whole flashback piece to Fiora. I thought it was well done!

Dickson is such a complex character, his actions in the game make me like and hate him at the same time.
Good work, I'm looking forward to future updates now that things are getting to the more interesting parts of the game.

I really liked the spider battle. Plus, you touched on the Giants. I'm sure later the Daring will come into play wherever that sidequest is. I never figured out where that one was

Very good chapter. I remember first meeting those giant spiders... it didn't exactly end well... ;p
Good work

... The formatting is in html btw

These chapters make me want to do more quests..XD
Hom Hom!X3, Nopons are so cute! Great Chapter!

That was a refreshing take on that quest! Plus you're mushing them together, which works much better than going back and forth!

Hehe more giant spiders incoming... ;p
Good work, keep it up.

Nice curbstomp with the brogs. Also, I got the mirror ahead of time as well, and it was basically like you've said here.
Keep it up!

Very good work, you translated this into written form nicely, thanks for the update.

Bionis' shoulder, here we come! I'm really excited for that section of the fic. Not to mention some of the Giant information coming up! I'll be waiting for the next chapter!